Aether_10101

To begin with, I like this novel whether it is for its characters or its story, that is why I want to congratulate the author for his work (and please author MORE ROMANCE between Jash and Ziva). Now, let's get down to business, and to the points that disturbed me. I found that the closer we got to chapter 200, the more the interactions between the characters seemed bland (I don't know if it's just an impression or me because I'm not used to this style of writing). Which I find quite unfortunate, because it makes the characters seem banal like robots. And I don't know if it improves after chapter 205.I hope this improves, because for me it is a key element to differentiate a good novel from an excellent novel. Even if this defect persists, it will not prevent me from continuing to read this work. Here is the end of the review that can be considered a little short, since there is only one point to criticize. I wish the author good luck in his work. Ps:English is not my native language

small personal criticism I unlocked the chapters up to chapter 59, and I find that the interactions between the Mc and FL are a bit emotionless. The same goes for the other characters. I don't know how to write a novel so I can't give advice but I will still make a little aside on this problem of lack of emotion, of humanity for the characters. Otherwise good job

I just started this story and after reading the first few chapters I immediately fell in love with the story. The two main characters are endearing and the story is interesting. Good job author, I hope this story doesn't get abandoned

I loved this novel good work author

I love this story. The novel has great potential. The author does a very good job. The only problem for me is the fear that this story will be abandoned. Let's hope that the author will manage to conclude his novel.

interesting, looking forward to the next chapters

the beginning after the end it exists in novel and in manhwa

I decided to re-upload the review after reading more chapters. good novel a tragic beginning which creates empathy for the reader, endearing characters. But also excellent update stability. But I find this novel quite childish, the first chapter shows that the mc is a bit naive. It's weird because I'm used to cool, cruel, ruthless Mcs. As said in the other comment, there is a lot to improve. Ps English is not my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes

new update. After following the author's advice to continue reading until chapter 50, The mc has really changed his personality!!!! Finally I can enjoy the story [img=recommend]

I like and I hooked on the plot of this story but I find the mc unbearable, irritable, stupid. I will trust the author and read till chapter 50 hoping the mc will change drastically.