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Reborn in Game of thrones with LOHP as Arya Stark (DROPPED)

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อ่านนิยาย Reborn in Game of thrones with LOHP as Arya Stark (DROPPED) โดย ผู้เขียน Schooldean ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.This is my Third life but it is the first time being a girl. I woke up in this cold place surrounded by loving parents and kind people but i know the future of this family and it is a TRAGEDY. My name...

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This is my Third life but it is the first time being a girl. I woke up in this cold place surrounded by loving parents and kind people but i know the future of this family and it is a TRAGEDY. My name is Arya Stark

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FULL ENGLISH VERSION ______________________________________ A MAN WITH OBSESSIVE - COMPULSIVE PERSONALITY DISORDER.. A WOMAN WITH SEVERE TRUST ISSUE.. THEN WHAT IF O-CPD TURN TO O.L.D., OBSESSIVE LOVE DISORDER? IS IT ROMANTIC? IS IT TOXIC? OR IS IT.. ROMANTICALLY TOXIC? ______________________________ (Sample Chap.) "Alright let's play" "... Enm..okay" I lay down the couch before stretching my body and turned to face him as he sat beside me with his other legs bend on the sofa while the other is on the floor and his elbow on the couch's lazily supporting his head, staring at me whilst I did the same. As I started, I ask.. "Lights On.. or.. Lights Off?" As I am looking at him I saw his lips stretched up a bit before he answered, "Lights On.." "With.. or Without?" "Depends.." "Depends on what?" "If it's you, I'll choose without, if not, then.. it's- With. " " Heh.. What a strange answer is that Mister.. Alright, then next, Inside the house or Outside? " "..Both" " Daring and Bold I see.., Soft Peach Bun or Creamy Peanut.. " "...Pfft.. tshaha.. I don't know who's the bolder one here.., I like both with the 'CHERRY' on top.." " Hahaha We're talking about what we like and foods we love, I really don't know what you mean.., so next question.. " " Free... Or Tied? " " .... " _______________________________________ P.S. O.L.D or OBSESSIVE LOVE DISORDER is a real disorder check it OUT

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Lazy_Fox111
Lazy_Fox111Lv4Lazy_Fox111

Proofread your own work and you'll see the issues yourself. The fic severely lacks in contexts and the grammar needs some work. It has potential and could live up to it if it was properly revised.

Celleborn
CellebornLv2Celleborn

You really should put in your synopsis that if the reader didn't read your other work they will find this fic very hard to understand. Well, this or use the fact that there are only 7 chapters and edit them to put more context. There is A LOT of cultivation stuff with a lot of details that don't mean anything with prior knowledge. I would recommend more details in the first chapter when the mc mention that this the third life, and a minor explanation of the cultivation concepts when introducing them. Hope these tips helps.

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

Extreme northern wuxia cultivation and uplifting fix-it story. It's alright, the writing quality would benefit from a spellchecker, the story does develop rapidly although for a large part along lines that arent even remotely impossible to develop at those speeds even in our world. The character him/her self is a bit bland, I feel no emotional connection with it, nor is it Arya in anything but name. The chapters are of fantastic size, so that's major kudos right there. World background is mostly what is default to the series her agricultural upliftment programs that somehow outperform most countries irl combined lol

Andrew_Miheso
Andrew_MihesoLv1Andrew_Miheso

Interesting premise but the plot feels rushed and too unrealistic. None of it is believable and the characters make no sense. Each character behaves abnormally

Narvin
NarvinLv6Narvin

Writing Quality 2 Stability of Updates 4 Story Development 4 Character Design 4 World Background 4 The total score 3.6 An interesting story. But very difficult to read

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