As I jolted awake I could see nothing, when I say nothing I mean everything around me was a pitch black void. After looking around for a few minutes I realized there was somebody who had been watching me. "You thinking this is fucking funny, come and face me like a man!" I screamed into the void however there was no reply only the sound of footsteps getting closer and closer. Turning towards the area where the sound was coming from I could make out an old man walking towards me.
"Little brat, for the services that you have completed in your past life you are allowed to go to a world of your choosing and you are also allowed 1 wish." The old man stated. I was so shocked that this was happening to me, I never thought that I would be like the guy in the novels who get reincarnated to where they want to go and also get a wish.
This was like a wish come true for me, without thinking about it I quickly replied: "I would like the world to be that of the teen wolf tv series, and my wish is to gain the powers of the Tribrid from Hope Michaelson in the tv series Legacies."
The old man looked like he was lost in thought for a few moments and then warned: "Because of your wish there will be several changes to the plot of the tv show and the whole world will be slightly different in the supernatural sense." I was ecstatic that I chose to ignore the warning, while I stood in the void waiting for the reincarnation to happen I said "Goodbye Old man" as I closed my eyes.
However, as nothing happened I opened my eyes to see the old man smiling at me amused, "What do you think is a funny old man!" I asked, The old man looked at me and replied: "I think it's funny how you think a god is an old man, for that I am going to give you several tasks to complete." After I heard what the tasks were I was shocked but also overjoyed, the task that the old man had given me was
1. Turn 5 people into hybrids for your pack.
2. Start a war with the Hunters and Vampire Coverns.
3. Make the strongest werewolf pack.
After hearing these task requests, I asked: "What do I gain from it?" The old man then smirked, "After you complete 1 task I will come and see you, give you a little reward and give you another task to complete. Also, I will not let you start from nothing in the world when you reincarnate you will have a credit card in your pocket which will have 1 million dollars which will allow you to afford house clothes and a car or motorbike to get around." This was the reply of the old man.
After the reply from the old man, he started to fade and this is when I realized it was time for me to reincarnate, so I close my eyes waiting for something to happen however I felt nothing so I opened my eyes and that was when I realized I was in some tomb.
Is this better than the other start I wrote a comment so I can get a better handle of how to write this book?