The novel "Marvel: Apocalypse" chronicles the epic journey of En Sabah Nur, later known as Apocalypse, a being of immense power and intellect. Over 5,000 years of history, Marvel's Apocalypse wages relentless conquest across the world, from ancient Egypt to modern times. Believing in "survival of the fittest", he manipulates and topples nations— Egypt, Okkara, K’un-Lun, and beyond—ruling as a godlike figure. Alongside his physical and mutant power, Apocalypse masters ancient magic, learning from sorcerers and mystic principalities alike, further increasing his dominance. By blending war, magic, and manipulation, Apocalypse shapes human history in his quest for ultimate power and immortality. Throughout the story, themes of power, identity, and evolution are central, as Apocalypse not only aims to rule but to redefine the destiny of the universe itself. Notes for the Readers - First things first, YES, English is my native language but actually not really, my first language was German but I came to the United States when I was eight so English is my BEST language. Second thing to note is that you do not have to be a Marvel comics reader to enjoy this, I REPEAT you don’t have to read Marvel comics to read this. I will do my best to explain everything as it comes along. I don't own any of the Marvel ideas that is instead Disney. If there is anything I missed or you do not understand in the story, post a comment. Multiple family members of mine are not Marvel fans but read this. The novel eventually will be about the God Emperor of the nation Okkara who as we know is Apocalypse (shout out to my Warhammer 40k fans!). The Egypt arc where he is “God-King” will be shorter and introduce Apocalypse which is then followed by one more arc, and finally he becomes the emperor of Okkara. This is where the kingdom building comes in, not so much in the Egypt arc. (As a side note, an Egyptian kingdom building novel would be cool.) After that he will improve Okkaran society and conquer various interest groups/peoples/nations around the world. He won’t conquer earth until after the third celestial host (2000AD). My main reason is not to mess up the timeline of the comics but also because the Celestials tell him to stay put during the second host along with the gods in 1000 AD, mutants have yet to rise in the general populace, and Gaia still has faith in humanity which she loses in the 21st century bringing the return of the Elder Gods to wipe out humanity (pollution has real consequences guys). Lastly, writing is freaking hard so support me and other writers. It is a lot harder than I realized I will be the first to admit, but I learned I do love this more than reading so I hope you enjoy my content. I publish 15 chapters ahead on Pátreon; the URL is https://www.pátreon.com/Fat_Immortal just change the “a” with a funny accent to a normal one.
Apocalypse found himself at a pivotal moment in his empire's future. Apocalypse had relied on his immense power, both physical and intellectual, to rule. However, as the leader of his empire and the future founder of Clan Akkaba, he recognized that governing his people required more than just brute strength or advanced technology. It required strategy, diplomacy, and a lineage to carry on his legacy.
Thus, Apocalypse resolved to form a harem, not for trivial pleasure, but for the sake of governance, legacy, and ensuring the continued evolution of his empire. These individuals would serve as his trusted confidants, helping to shape the future of his kingdom and Clan Akkaba. They would assist in administering his territories, managing the complexities of ruling over humans and mutants alike, and ensuring that his empire thrived under unified leadership.
Moreover, this harem would serve a more profound purpose—producing the next generation of his heirs, individuals born with the potential to carry on his bloodline and further his vision of "survival of the fittest." In Apocalypse's eyes, his offspring would not only inherit his strength and power but also his intellectual capacity.
The competition for his harem would be fierce, as only the strongest, wisest, and most capable individuals would be selected to share in his future. These would be women capable of bearing the weight of the empire's future and guiding Clan Akkaba in the centuries to come. Those who wished to be part of this inner circle would have to prove their worth, not just in terms of physical prowess, but also in terms of governance, intellect, and loyalty to Apocalypse's vision.
As the empire moved toward a new era, the harem competition would mark a significant step in Apocalypse's plan to cement his legacy—both in governance and in ensuring that the future heirs of his empire would be as powerful and capable as he was.
The royal palace of Apocalypse had transformed into a place of gathering and anticipation as the competition began. Women from all over Egypt had been summoned, each selected for their exceptional beauty, strength, and intelligence. These women represented the ideals of Apocalypse's philosophy—only the fittest would survive, and only the strongest among them would earn a place in his royal harem, chosen to pass on his powerful legacy.
The courtyard was filled with an air of excitement and tension as the women, adorned in luxurious garments and jewels, awaited the beginning of the first trial: the Test of Beauty. It was not merely a superficial test of physical appearance, but a deeper measure of presence, grace, and the ability to captivate and command attention. To Apocalypse, beauty was not simply an aesthetic quality; it was a reflection of inner strength and the capacity to wield influence.
Apocalypse himself stood on a high platform overlooking the courtyard, his imposing figure casting a long shadow over the assembly. He watched as the women lined up, each one unique in her own right, each one a potential candidate for his royal harem. His eyes, glowing with the power of the Ka Stone embedded in his forehead, scanned the group, calculating, assessing.
Behind him, his newly appointed vizier, Ozymandias, stood in silent attendance. Once a man of flesh and blood, Ozymandias had been transformed by Apocalypse into living stone, his once-human features now hardened and unyielding. He observed the proceedings with no emotional attachment.
"Let the competition begin," Apocalypse commanded, his voice booming across the courtyard. His words carried the weight of destiny, and the assembled women straightened, knowing that the first test would soon be underway.
The Parade of Elegance
The first stage of the competition was a parade, where each woman would present herself before Apocalypse and the gathered court. They would be judged not only on their physical beauty but on how they carried themselves—their grace, poise, and the presence they exuded.
One by one, the women stepped forward, their movements carefully measured. Silks and precious jewels shimmered in the sunlight as they walked, each trying to outshine the others. The courtyard was filled with murmurs of admiration as the most beautiful women in Egypt displayed their elegance.
First was Neferura, a noblewoman of ancient lineage. Her beauty was the kind that inspired poets and artists—a vision of regal perfection. She moved with the grace of a queen, her every step deliberate, her chin held high as if the world itself bowed to her presence. Her dark eyes, framed by kohl, scanned the crowd, and a faint smile graced her lips as she approached Apocalypse, her beauty undeniable. Yet, it was not just her appearance that captivated; it was the way she commanded the attention of every eye upon her.
Next was Asenath, a warrior by blood and lineage. Unlike Neferura, her beauty was fierce and raw. Her physique was powerful, her muscles finely toned, but she moved with a surprising fluidity. Her eyes burned with a fire that matched her ferocity in battle, and though her steps were softer than those of a dancer, there was an underlying danger in every movement. Asenath embodied a beauty that was both deadly and mesmerizing.
As the parade continued, other women of notable beauty presented themselves—Isis, with her enchanting charm and lithe movements; Kiya, a master of subtle elegance, whose eyes held mysteries few could decipher; and finally, Serqet, whose gaze alone seemed to weave enchantments, her ethereal presence nearly otherworldly.
Apocalypse observed them all in silence, his mind weighing their merits. Beauty, to him, was not just about how they looked but about the power they wielded through it. The way each woman carried herself revealed her inner strength, her confidence, and the way she would command not just attention but respect.
The Measure of Presence
After the parade, the competition moved to the second phase of the beauty test: a trial of presence. Apocalypse believed that beauty was a form of power—a way to influence and dominate the world around you. The women were tasked with demonstrating their ability to captivate an audience, to show how their beauty could bend others to their will.
The candidates were placed in front of a crowd, made up of royal ministers, courtiers, and commoners. Their goal was simple: command the attention of the crowd and sway them without uttering a single word. They would be judged on how their mere presence could control a room.
Neferura was the first to step forward. She stood tall, her regal bearing effortlessly drawing the attention of every eye. Without moving, she exuded authority, and the crowd fell silent as they watched her. There was no need for gestures or words—her beauty spoke for itself, commanding the respect and awe of those in attendance. Her grace was not passive; it was the kind that demanded submission.
Then came Asenath, whose presence was as fierce as her warrior's heart. She moved with purpose, her gaze intense, and the crowd was drawn to her like moths to a flame. Her beauty was not gentle but scorching, and those who watched her felt both admiration and fear. She was a force of nature, her every movement deliberate and powerful, as though she could strike at any moment.
Serqet's turn was different. She moved like a whisper, subtle and almost imperceptible at first, but once her presence was felt, it was impossible to look away. Her beauty was more than physical; it was mystical. Her eyes, deep and dark, seemed to hold secrets that only the bold dared to seek. The crowd was entranced, drawn into the spell of her presence, as if she could command their very souls.
As the competition continued, each woman's presence was measured, and their ability to wield their beauty as a weapon of influence became apparent. Some failed to hold the attention of the crowd, their beauty superficial and fleeting. But others, like Neferura, Asenath, and Serqet, stood out as women who not only embodied beauty but the power that came with it.
Conclusion of the First Trial
The test of beauty came to an end as the sun began to set, casting long shadows across the courtyard. Apocalypse watched with satisfaction, having seen what he needed to see. The women had shown not only their physical beauty but the strength of their presence, their ability to influence and command.
"Beauty is power," Apocalypse said, his voice carrying across the courtyard. "And power belongs to those who can wield it."
The women who had proven themselves worthy—Neferura, Asenath, Serqet, and a few others—stood tall, knowing they had passed the first test. But they also knew that the competition was far from over. The next trials, tests of wits and combat, would soon follow. Only the strongest and most capable would survive to become part of Apocalypse's harem.
For now, the first trial had separated the weak from the worthy. And those who remained knew that the real challenge was just beginning.
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