LIBRARY OF HEAVEN'S MYSTIC PATH(Dropped)

I really like this. Wish I could read more novels like this. I like how long the chapters are. The conversation becomes better as you keep reading. Hope the writer will update soon.

I am rating my own novel. I think it's good for a first try. First of all English isn't my native language, so mistakes can be made.................... .... ...................

Ha shame on you, i know this isn't your first nove because I read you other 2 novel on fan fiction haha. Wait you are the original author right? If not it will be awkward hehe. Anyway I really like this novel. Even on fanfiction.net this is one of the novel I always wait for the updates. So cheers your novel got a fan~

I'm not trying to sound like an asshole but come on! We get it. Your mom died. Stop bringing up in every chapter. Also, the MC feels like it is forced to interact with other people.

Very well written and fun to read, I got hooked on reading very easily and stayed up to 4am without realizing when I was reading The story is fun, captivating and also 'compared to other fanfics' very new, although I have to point out that around chapter 7-9 it takes a bad turn which I personally did not enjoy where he got stuck in a spacial storm or wormhole and got transported to another dimension, parallel to his current HP world which for me interrupted the story and was completely unnecessary

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Great beginning to a story that has many possibilities. Interesting development for this story. In one moment it became a little confusing but now it is alright.

Sorry guys for the late update! I had studies to finish. I hope the next chapter will be uploaded on schedule though. And don't worry though I won't turn this novel into an erotic one. And please review the novel!

Hmm.... Honestly I love the Harry Potter series. But this series simply seems to be boring to me. Of course this is only my opinion. From the other reviews it's obvious that others seems to like it. Anyway I'll continue reading a few more chapters and see how it goes.

Interesting development for this story . In one moment its becomes confusing and the next fun. The story line is good and its very well written just hope there will be an upload soon

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The only reason I am posting this is because he hasn't updated for a long time............................................... 140 characters..................................................................................

nice storyline and character are more real and believable the mc is not op and his power is progressing with time nice touch of multiverse also.

So far I like this. But I REALLY HOPE THERE IS NO HAREM!!!! LIKE PLS!! NO!! but other than that I look forward time what comes next in the story. UT's very interesting. It satisfy my Potter verse cravings very well.

I really like this novel but if he has all this knowledge he should be out using it by either becoming a ceo of a company or a king so he can use that influence to either gain more power or train more people to help him.

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