Great beginning to a story that has many possibilities. Interesting development for this story. In one moment it became a little confusing but now it is alright.
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I really like this. Wish I could read more novels like this. I like how long the chapters are. The conversation becomes better as you keep reading. Hope the writer will update soon.
I am rating my own novel. I think it's good for a first try. First of all English isn't my native language, so mistakes can be made.................... .... ...................
Ha shame on you, i know this isn't your first nove because I read you other 2 novel on fan fiction haha. Wait you are the original author right? If not it will be awkward hehe. Anyway I really like this novel. Even on fanfiction.net this is one of the novel I always wait for the updates. So cheers your novel got a fan~
I'm not trying to sound like an asshole but come on! We get it. Your mom died. Stop bringing up in every chapter. Also, the MC feels like it is forced to interact with other people.
Very well written and fun to read, I got hooked on reading very easily and stayed up to 4am without realizing when I was reading The story is fun, captivating and also 'compared to other fanfics' very new, although I have to point out that around chapter 7-9 it takes a bad turn which I personally did not enjoy where he got stuck in a spacial storm or wormhole and got transported to another dimension, parallel to his current HP world which for me interrupted the story and was completely unnecessary
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Sorry guys for the late update! I had studies to finish. I hope the next chapter will be uploaded on schedule though. And don't worry though I won't turn this novel into an erotic one. And please review the novel!
Hmm.... Honestly I love the Harry Potter series. But this series simply seems to be boring to me. Of course this is only my opinion. From the other reviews it's obvious that others seems to like it. Anyway I'll continue reading a few more chapters and see how it goes.
Interesting development for this story . In one moment its becomes confusing and the next fun. The story line is good and its very well written just hope there will be an upload soon
Respecting knowledge, chasing after truth, controlling fire, commanding frost, wielding lightning, riding the storm, and summoning the undead... Those who spread ancient prophecies and curses are known as wizards. “Phoenix Bloodline + Ancient Rune of Eternal Life...” “After 40 million sunsets, I’ll finally achieve immortality!”
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