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RuberDFLv55yr
2019-02-27 22:07

It's an interesting story. The only thing that I don't particularly appreciate is how much of a show-off (even while he said he didn't want attention) is Harry, the first situation that comes to mind his the situation in the library, he had to show off to the librarian how much of a genius he was just for let her help him find some book???! And it's too god damn fast-paced, he goes from killing Quirrell AKA Voldemort (And e even let his soul escape even though he could probably fund a way to destroy or at least trap his soul with the F*ucking "LIBRARY OF HEAVEN'S") from barely escaping with his life from a Dyrad that was apparently his mother killer... why in name of all that is Unholy was she in the forest of death? She didn't have any reason to be there, no one explained anything about her. Then he goes to an alternate dimension... just like that, this isn't even the wors of all, during the course of the story the protagonist seems to want to maintain the canon story as much as possible even while interfering in other things, for example, why didn't he just killed Quirrell the first day of school once he was in his room? He could have simply ordered MICASA to stab his brain while he was asleep and spare himself the headache. And don't even let me start on "that" alternate dimension, let me be clear I didn't read the Fanfiction where you pick up the plot, but from what I've understood, that world Voldemort wants to evocate Cthulhu for some idiotic reason... and Harry seems to already know this, then... why.... why has he waited till the last goddamn second to stop him? And he even stopped something like "CTHULHU" with a Patronus? (even a modified one should not have that strong of an effect on an entity stronger than gods) and the worst of all? the same entity that the book said to be the entity to end all creation in all the multiverse. Said that he would have his revenge on him... maybe you didn't understand how "powerful" an entity like Cthulhu is, but to gain his wrath just because the protagonist wanted to follow the script?... that just a foolish choice. In the end though I like the story I hope the author will check these minor things an improve if story.

LIBRARY OF HEAVEN'S MYSTIC PATH(Dropped)

Mike_Lu
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Sorry guys for the late update! I had studies to finish. I hope the next chapter will be uploaded on schedule though. And don't worry though I won't turn this novel into an erotic one. And please review the novel!

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