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Ghosts & Souls

นักเขียน: DaoisttEfl77
Fantasy Romance
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Eye of Aragos: The Darkness comes

[ ... In a momentous evening, Christopher Salvatore, a compassionate person who often feels manipulated by others, experiences a profound change when he encounters a mysterious woman. In a twist of fate, this unexpected meeting grants Christopher supernatural abilities as a vampire, forever altering the trajectory of his life. Not knowing what powers he owns, he later discovers that there is an individual residing within his very soul. The individual is known as Ardelean, a servant of The Darkness, the embodiment of Evil, who possesses an intense thirst for revenge upon his previous love partner, The Light. After Christopher is chosen by Ardelean to become his host, The Darkness is determined to possess Christopher's body and unleash its vengeance upon the Universe. If such an event occurs, his life will be lost. However... Is that truly going to happen? Or Christopher breaks free from his puppet strings and emerges as an indomitable Vampire, striking fear into the hearts of all in the Universe ... ] ________________________ ! Warning: Narcissism, Manipulation, and other Toxic behaviors are present in the later development of this book together with R-18 Chapters ! ! Reader is advised ! ________________________ [ Cover is mine. All covers are made by myself or at least edited if they are done by someone else. If an Author wants, I'll change it but only if you have proof the cover is yours :) ] ________________________ [ This story is fiction and any connection to the RW is mere coincidence... ]

Patrik_Crown · แฟนตาซี
4.9
88 Chs

The Devil's Good Girl

A cheating boyfriend and a traitorous best friend had always been a cliché start to a story. Fil often thought those things only happened in such narratives. Who would have thought this same cliché twist would happen to her? Fil was a devout Christian who held marriage and marital fidelity sacred. She had been a very good girl from childhood to adulthood. But when she caught her childhood sweetheart slash fiancé and her best friend rolling under the sheets, Fil wanted to rebel for the first time. The first step of her rebellious journey? Getting drunk. After drowning her sorrows with the help of alcohol, Fil met the enigmatic Jackson. The moment her eyes met those tantalizing golden orbs, words slipped past her lips without any notion of the kind of situation she was getting herself into: “Will I go to hell if I lose my virginity before marriage?” His thin, red lips curled up as a glint flickered across his naturally sharp eyes, and he said, “Who knows? But I can bring heaven to you if you want me to.” ***** Jackson. A man shrouded in mystery and secrets, licentious to the core with zero morality, someone who had grown bored playing games with life. Until one fateful night, a woman suddenly appeared before him — a perfect prey for a boring night. Little did he know, a night with a rebellious wannabee wouldn’t be enough to quench his biological urge. Nor would he ever fathom the colors she gave to his gray-colored world. A good girl with dirty thoughts and a sinful man who had even dirtier thoughts. A relationship that started for revenge and to satisfy one’s need; was there even space for true love? How? When the man bending her down would nastily whisper in her ear, “You've been a fucking good girl.” **** As the two grapple with their own demons threatening to tear them apart, doubts would start surfacing in their hearts. Was this rebellion worth sacrificing her principles for? Could she truly find happiness in the arms of a man so steeped in darkness? And for Jackson, was redemption possible for a devil like him? And if so, would she be the one to lead him towards the light? Would she even accept his darkest secrets and the hell of his world? In a world where trust was a rare commodity and love was a fragile flame, Fil and Jackson would have to navigate the treacherous waters of desire and redemption. Would they face the unknown together? Or would they let go to save themselves from the impending pain of being together? **** JOIN MY DISCORD SERVER: https://discord.gg/gXCMQwmrGY

BAJJ · แฟนตาซี
4.7
274 Chs

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Sravani_Gorla
Sravani_GorlaLv1Sravani_Gorla

Very good job on the story I love how you put lots of interest into this story keep up the amazing work[img=fp][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend]

Darine_ALRAMMAH
Darine_ALRAMMAHLv1Darine_ALRAMMAH

The total plot and idea of this is interesting. I could the author is feeling himself from the style and details. The author seems new to this, but I'm sure he'll get the hang of this after reviewing well. As I said the plot is decent, the scenes and characters are put together in a good way. This plot is promising and I'm impressed with the effort put in this for further improvements! Waiting for more...

Akira_Monadelle
Akira_MonadelleLv13Akira_Monadelle

I'm sorry but I only give honest reviews and so, I'm going to be very honest. This novel is unreadable, I'm sorry for sounding harsh but it's a total mess. The novel lacks everything a novel should have. There's too much problems to list out. I recommend that the author read other novels beforehand and attempt this novel again. From the messy first chapter, I could tell that the plot is very cool but that's all that's good about this. This is my honest review, I apologize if you were hurt by my words.

Book_Pen
Book_PenLv3Book_Pen

The plot is interesting!! But the way you portray, will make the readers more interested. They are many grammatical mistakes, try using a grammar checker app. Put the conversations in different lines such that the readers don't get confused. Divide the description into paragraphs to make the novel friendly for the readers. The synopsis of the novel is missing. It is necessary as it gives the readers a brief description after the novel. Since the plot is good, I recommend you make a few changes to make the novel more appealing. Keep Going!!

funny2333
funny2333Lv2funny2333

Can't even know where to start. I love the story. I can't stop reading. I wish to have read it to the end of this instance. I totally love your description of events and how well-structured your conversations are.

TonyT
TonyTLv2TonyT

The way you write your story, I can see that you put a lot of effort in the dialogue and it does seem like you do care about the characters. However, the general structure of your sentences aren't cohesive and lack the basic form when it comes to dialogue. For example, the none usage of quotations marks can lead to very confusing exchanges between the characters. Also, it will help the story flow much better if you cut up your writing into paragraphs as opposed to a giant wall of text. Other than that, I can see that you do care about your writing and characters, you just need to work on the basic structures of writing. Just keeping working and you will eventually find a good flow

violetta_1
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It's a very nice read...keep writing dear author...[img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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