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Fate/illusionary speed

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It was just an ordinary day, I took my brother to school, I did a few chores for my parents and while mowing the lawn I'm hit by a car. For most people that would be the end however due to a twist of Fate this is just the beginning of my new life, with a few upgrades.

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Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

Reincarnated and traveling to another world, Eiji Seiya initially thought the world was normal. That was what he thought before he met the heroine and protagonist of the franchise he had watched in his previous life. Not only that, after he awakened the Inner Voice System to grow strong by complaining about plot, heroine and protagonist in his heart to get many rewards. He is determined to increase his power so that he can save his home world, the world where he was reincarnated that was hit by the disaster "Honkai" and save beautiful girls like Kiana, Mai, Bronya, Rita and others who had tragic endings in the original works! "I will save them all!" However... Everything went smoothly... Eiji earned rewards every time he changed the plot in another franchise. It's just that... What's wrong with these heroines? Lala Satalin Deviluke who was supposed to be engaged to the protagonist instead became his fiancée. Sona Sitri suddenly called him to the student council office and said she wanted to make a deal with him. Rias Gremory who was supposed to ask the protagonist for help to solve her political marriage problem with Riser Phenex inexplicably came to him. The girls were disgusted at the protagonists of their respective franchises. Something was wrong here! Not only that, heroines like Kotegawa Yui, Sairenji Haruna, Akeno Himejima, Kuroka, Serafall Leviathan, Grayfia Lucifuge, Sakurajima Mai, Ai Hoshino, Kasumigaoka Utaha and others... They like him! All the super beautiful and sexy women that many men in the world covet surround him and leave their respective protagonists. Grayfia even betrayed her husband. Eiji who saw all this was dumbfounded. At first he was confused as to why these heroines were surrounding him, but gradually he realized and knew that it was all happening because ... His inner voice! - Genre Details: [Not too serious + Harem + Comedy + No yuri + No netorare + MC is manipulative + MC slaps protagonist + Plot focus on heroine + Not waste so many chapters for unimportant characters except 1/2 chapter + Except Protagonist, MC doesn't waste his time so long with other guys + MC has fiance + MC has many girlfriends + MC is not perfect, sometimes moron + MC is sadistic + MC is not herbivorous + MC is ambitious to get pretty girl. Cough, I mean reward from his system and be strong + MC is possessive, there is no way he would let his girl dance with another guy + MC has an organization and beautiful subordinates + MC sometimes takes a break, he stops being manipulative although he will do it again in the next few chapters as it is hard to restrain himself + MC has a fetish of making his girls drink a lot of his milk until their stomachs bulge + Author sometimes has brain problems where his brain circuits decline in a few chapters due to lack of sugar before exploding again after refilling and making readers eagerly await the next chapter + Author updates every day unless he is sick or has problems in his life which is sad] - Get the latest chapters faster on my patreon. Support me on patreon to keep me motivated to write more chapters: www.patreon.com/DogLicker

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B0ssu
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This story should be skipped. On the technical side, grammar and spelling is poor, and the author has no concept of pacing. Characterization devolves into flat plot devices and overused tropes. As for the more substantive parts of the story, this is one of those fics where going into original content is worse than the source material. The story starts with an interesting premise of the MC replacing Shirou as the one Kiritsugu saves, then proceeds to waste that promising start with a poorly thought out and rushed plot where the MC gets storybreakingly OP abilities to the point where the author starts introducing original storyline and characters and fully jumps the shark by Chapter 39. The result? Let's just say the Disney trilogy and Game of Thrones Season 8 are each better than this dumpster fire.

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It has a very bad drama, because you don't separate the text into more paragraphs, in my point of view reading a lot of text and having just a few paragraphs ruins the experience of reading a fanfic for me. In the few chapters the protagonist is able to 'Create' a true magic, it is simply too exaggerated. The protagonist's interactions with Kiritsugu are very forced, it feels like you're reading an essay.

Blackleperd
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You good sir deserve a five-star rating! I haven't seen I well-done Fate fanfic in a long time, and this has all the makings of a good one! The chapters so far set a great foundation for the story, and a great foundation is half the battle won! Strive for excellence, and I wish you all the best!

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Pretty good so far. Plz dont drop this . . .

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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

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I want to read more and see were you plan on taking this I mean it is a fate fanfiction that doesn't have Shiro and comedy in it so I'm going to keep reading

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this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

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