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EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

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We all know about the word ‘Essence’. Heard a lot about it, making use of it. Commonly known as an extract of herbs and food. Regardless, what if this essence is a part of a natural element. Like Fire, water, earth, and wind; imagine a rare element called Essence….. Eden, called in full name Eden Locker discovers on his thirteenth birthday that he is mixed blood, Magus. Unlike some humans around him who are half or sometimes pure. This growing Magus can easily change the circulation of his blood from complete human to pure Magus. It is a story of an orphan boy who is adapter by a family that also carries a different bloodline. At first, life remains normal for him but, then one day everything changes when Eden gets an invitation from the school named Bridge to Golden Gate. A school where the combination of fantasy and reality features a different world. Along with a new journey in life, Eden also encounters a different system. Quest after quest, Eden began to attach along with the system when suddenly the Main Quest opens itself and ask him to complete a quest that is forbidden in the school. What will Eden do to complete it? Will there be further quests such as this? How will Eden Locker adjust his life path along with the new system and the fantasy school? Come and have fun in discord and learn more about my works: https://discord.gg/kwpy3qfY

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Talent Awakening: Draconic Overlord Of The Apocalypse

"Level up? Dragons?" Eighteen. The age of Awakening. An important moment where every human in the desolate maga-cities unlocks their Talent, a unique ability to carve a path in this monster-plagued apocalyptic world. Alister Hazenworth, a graduating student, and a rising star at the prestigious Aegis Academy, was destined for greatness. His exceptional athleticism and magical aptitude promise a powerful Talent – a guarantee for a secure life and social status. But fate had different plans. During Alister's Awakening ceremony, it's revealed that he's a Summoner. Instead of admiration, he faces mockery. His once bright future turns bleak as his "friends" desert him for Talents they see as more "useful." left alone, Alister awakens a system. [Host found, system binding...] [System binded successfully.] [Congrats, you have gain the status of 'player'.] [Ding!! Congrats to the player for awakening The Dragonforge - an overlord system.] [Ding!! it has been detected that the player possesses a latent draconic aspect, and as such will only be able to summon dragons!!] [Will the player like to proceed with their first summoning?] Cast aside and underestimated, Alister becomes a force to be reckoned with. He embarks on a journey, building his own dragon army – a crew of majestic wyverns, fearsome drakes, and ancient wyrms. He raids the wastelands, reclaims lost resources, and dismantles the prejudice against summoners. Every day, his power grows, his bond with his dragons deepens, and his legend spreads like wildfire. [A/N: This is a slow paced novel, don't expect the protagonist to suddenly start out overpowered and start dominating left and right, he will become an overlord of dragons, yes, but it will take time. (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)] Cover made by me /⁠ᐠ⁠。⁠ꞈ⁠。⁠ᐟ⁠\ [WSA 2024]

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vesnxx
vesnxxLv3vesnxx

I love it ❤ i like supernatural stories but this days it is not easy to find one that is not repeating itself like 50 others. Thia onw though is unique and amazing. You managed to surprise me with a really good adventure thank you 😁❤

_DarkDestiny_
_DarkDestiny_Lv1_DarkDestiny_

In a pool of web novels that suffers from cliche and copy-paste worlds, this author managed to create a unique experience through his epic world-building and superb writing style which doesn't shy away from the bloody implications of the story.

Jonas321
Jonas321Lv10Jonas321

The author demonstrates mastery in crafting a captivating narrative, standing out for the skill in developing an engaging plot, characterizing individuals in a detailed manner, and creating a world rich in details. The plot is well-balanced, featuring intriguing twists that keep the reader eagerly anticipating what will happen next. The meticulous description of the characters fosters an emotional connection, delving convincingly into their motivations. Overall, the work transcends mere storytelling, providing a captivating literary experience!!!! Keep up the excellent work, author!!!!!!!!

OVERKILL
OVERKILLLv13OVERKILL

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

The story is pretty decent for me. It has the potential I must say. Writing quality is okay but I spotted several ones. Though not to be a big deal and I still enjoyed my reading. The pacing is fine and also the narration. All in all, a good read. Improve more and I hope you will become a veteran author in the future. 😉

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusLv4Shadow_Magus

Really good novel with an interesting plot and acceptable pacing. Furthermore, there is good grammar and sentence construction, while the characters do indeed feel alive. Overall great novel. Can't wait for more!

DylanHusand
DylanHusandLv12DylanHusand

HERE FIVE STARS FOR YOU! DON'T ASK ME WHY IM HERE! BECAUSE I WANTED TO DO THIS. Just reading this novel until 20+ chapter, u will see how good this story!

ricebucket0_0
ricebucket0_0Lv13ricebucket0_0

Intriguing premise with a very interesting way of writing, Author writes in a style of his own that builds a beautiful image of the novel world. Dialogues are done well, a little bit childish actually but enough to keep one’s blood boiling as the mc makes his grand speech… Overall a five stars for me. A little bit of advice from me, I think the synopsis could have been done better. At list, break them to more paragraphs so that it wouldn’t look like a very huge block that make my eyes dizzy from afar lol. Keep up the good work, author! I kept the book in my library so will be expecting more updates soon!

0Mashroom
0MashroomLv30Mashroom

great story with ita unique storyline tbhx the writing itself need some fixing with the grammars and all and development is kinfa then again this novel is brand new, i might change my feview futher on.

Rainbow420
Rainbow420Lv3Rainbow420

Nice story. I like it. Nice Nice Nice Nice Author go ahead, you will be succeed and keep writing. Thank you for your book. 🥰🥰🥰🥗[img=recommend][img=coins]

krish_patel
krish_patelLv2krish_patel

Amazing! This has the potential to be a great system novel. Characters:The characters are good. Eden is well written and a great mc.He is not too arrogant nor too humble. Side characters are good as well. Writing quality: It is good but there are some tying mistakes. Story development: The pace is amazing, the fast pace will hook you into reading. The worldbuilding is very interesting and unique. The system itself is my favorite part in the story. Overall, if you love system novel with likeable characters, great worldbuilding, and a awesome system then u should give it a try.

RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamataLv11RyujiSakamata

I would like to say that this story can be great once edited. I've seen locked chapters in the later part. You should cooperate with the editor to make these adjustments. Overall, I expect a unique turn of things. Keep up the good work, author!

aleksandra_pano10
aleksandra_pano10Lv1aleksandra_pano10

This story is amazing I really liked first chapter! Writing style is really good and I like how you took the MC back in time. Synopsis is great it gives you a good information about the story do you can understand it better. I suggest this story to you all Great job 👏🏻 [img=recommend]

Kamelzy1
Kamelzy1Lv2Kamelzy1

I like that the synopsis is well written and so clear. The opening chapter also the scenes are cool and tense enough to make me want to read further. Nice job author! Keep it up! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Account_nolonger
Account_nolongerLv1Account_nolonger

I loved the story line, it's perfectly written and the plot is amazing, can't wait to read more, please keep uploading, keep it up❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Josef_Jf
Josef_JfLv1Josef_Jf

I give you five stars to encourage you. I like your story. Don't stop your amazing writing. I hope you will be do your best. Thank you for your story.

JaneSmitten
JaneSmittenLv4JaneSmitten

From the previous reviews, you can tell that this story has something solid going for it. What can I say? Read this book. Really. You will not only love it, but you also won’t regret it. 5 solid stars.

SCARLETZEE
SCARLETZEELv2SCARLETZEE

Oh no! I ran out of Power Stone! I'll come back tomorrow to read more and give the power stone! this book is worth more than only Power Stone, actually! The writing style is awesome! I could imagine all the scenes moment by moment. Great job!

superAyan
superAyanLv13superAyan

A great story with a gripping plot and good writing style! The author's narration is very apt and detailed that readers can visualize the situations! Not too hard and boring to read but fun instead!!

The_Drunkencrater
The_DrunkencraterLv2The_Drunkencrater

I like the way the story is written, and like that there are a bunch of elements brought together. it does get a bit confusing sometimes though... especially for a fast reader like me

Avidfan
AvidfanLv13Avidfan

Thank you for this wonderful story. When I read tis story, this reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist and Harry Potter which I read. The different is that it has a system to make things clear. It is better than Harry Potter to me.

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