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vesnxxLv32yr
2022-09-17 12:33

I love it ❤ i like supernatural stories but this days it is not easy to find one that is not repeating itself like 50 others. Thia onw though is unique and amazing. You managed to surprise me with a really good adventure thank you 😁❤

EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

Ninestar619_5803
4.8
122 Chs

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Ninestar619_5803
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thank you so much

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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

author sama is this novel a harem I hope it's not

Ninestar619_5803:thank you so much
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RainbowBeheader
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harem?

Ninestar619_5803:thank you so much
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The story is pretty decent for me. It has the potential I must say. Writing quality is okay but I spotted several ones. Though not to be a big deal and I still enjoyed my reading. The pacing is fine and also the narration. All in all, a good read. Improve more and I hope you will become a veteran author in the future. 😉

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Intriguing premise with a very interesting way of writing, Author writes in a style of his own that builds a beautiful image of the novel world. Dialogues are done well, a little bit childish actually but enough to keep one’s blood boiling as the mc makes his grand speech… Overall a five stars for me. A little bit of advice from me, I think the synopsis could have been done better. At list, break them to more paragraphs so that it wouldn’t look like a very huge block that make my eyes dizzy from afar lol. Keep up the good work, author! I kept the book in my library so will be expecting more updates soon!

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Rainbow420
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Nice story. I like it. Nice Nice Nice Nice Author go ahead, you will be succeed and keep writing. Thank you for your book. 🥰🥰🥰🥗[img=recommend][img=coins]

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krish_patel
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Amazing! This has the potential to be a great system novel. Characters:The characters are good. Eden is well written and a great mc.He is not too arrogant nor too humble. Side characters are good as well. Writing quality: It is good but there are some tying mistakes. Story development: The pace is amazing, the fast pace will hook you into reading. The worldbuilding is very interesting and unique. The system itself is my favorite part in the story. Overall, if you love system novel with likeable characters, great worldbuilding, and a awesome system then u should give it a try.

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