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brother of a jobless reincarnation (up for adoption)

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What is brother of a jobless reincarnation (up for adoption)

อ่านนิยาย brother of a jobless reincarnation (up for adoption) โดย ผู้เขียน Idk_wqe2 ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.I own nothing... just the OC.new world, new possibilities, Magic, swords. adventures.what can go wrong right?a story about a guy who got reincarnated as the brother of the main character.knowing the f...

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I own nothing... just the OC. new world, new possibilities, Magic, swords. adventures. what can go wrong right? a story about a guy who got reincarnated as the brother of the main character. knowing the future, he decides to take up a sword and change everything he doesn't like.

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Locked In His Web - Taming The Devil Mafia

“What is love?" His eyes widened. "Carmen, did you just mention that!?” With his voice speaking of rage and burning in anger, he asked. “Yes. I have always done. I love you so much” she mouthed with her words stressed boldly with a firm gase in his dark orb that seems to darken every passing second. “You can try to ignore me if you can… Only if you know how eager I am and how badly I crave for you and want to tame you”. With those promising words from her, which left a dark creepy smile on her face, she stormed out. “‘Love’ did she just call it? Did she think I will fall for that shit? If only she knew how much love is a weakness to every man”. He muttered to himself as he sat down worriedly. As a mafia boss and the most dreadful man in the city, he must not have compassion, nor can he fall in love. She is the only one who has that guts to talks bravely to him. Even with his powers, his strength has its limitations as it went down when he is before her. He is fearless, Dangerous, And kills without sparing a second to think! He kills to live and lives to kill! The smell of blood is what he enjoys most!!! He is not just all about dangers but handsome! He's a demigod that every lady dreamt of having a night stand with! A girl sold to him by her ruthless father and stepmother changed everything… *She is annoying *She is irresistible *She is hot *Lastly, she is the goddess of beauty ‘What follows when she did the undo?’ She's a spy sent to monitor him, find his weakness and win his heart, will she accomplish that? Won't she fall in love in the process? What if the devil finds out? Will she be killed by the fearless devil, even if he does not forgive anyone?? Is she an exception or will she be killed for what she has done?. Want to find out how this misery unravels? Then this book is a go! Real Blurb "What is love!? Carmen did you just mention that!?" With his speaking of rage and burning in anger; he asked. "Yes... I have always do— I love you" she mouthed with her words stressed. "You can try and ignore me if you can... Only if you know how eager I am and how badly I want to tame you". With those promising words from her which left a dark creepy smile on her face; she walked out. "Love did she just call it? Did she think I will fall for that shit? If only she knew how much love is a weakness to every man". He muttered to himself as he sat down worriedly. As a mafia boss, he must not have compassion nor can he fall in love. She is the only one who have that fits to talks bravely to him. Even with his powers, his strength have it's limitations as it went down when he is before her. He is fearless, Dangerous, And kills without a sparing a second to think! He kills to live and lives to kill! The smell of blood is what he enjoy most!!! The dangerous man never forgives anyone even if it is blood—"fuck blood relatives when it comes to the smell of blood!" He is not just all about dangers but handsome! He's a demigod and every ladies hopes for just a nightstand with him. A girl sold to him by ruthless father and stepmother changed everything... *She is annoying *She is irresistible *She is hot *Lastly, she is the goddess of beauty What follows when she do the undo—... She's a spy sent to monitor him, find his weakness and win his heart, will she accomplish that? Won't she fall in love in the process? What if the devil finds out? Will she be killed by the fearless devil even if he does not forgive anyone?? Is she an exception or will she be killed for what she have done?!!! Wanna find out how this misery unravel? Then this book is a go

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Senpai_Sama_Chan
Senpai_Sama_ChanLv3Senpai_Sama_Chan

Im looking forward to this, Ive read a couple of jobless fanfics and theyre generally not that great. I am BEGGING you. Please dont make this a "the girls fall for me for no reason at all" type fic. So many jobless fics start out decent and then go the "Im better then everybody, all the girls love me" route and it drives me nuts

Etiger789
Etiger789Lv15Etiger789

Great story so far, though it doest feel progressive. All I've read is him being weak or not good enough, or just struggling with everything when combined with his talent and hard work he shouldn't be staggering.( I think you mean stagnating.)Maybe lack of inspiration. He has a great teacher, talent is hardworking, and has arguably one of the strongest weapons in fate and the most holy sword, Excaliber. Just imagine what he can do if he can unseal it and get rid of the 13 seals holding excaliber back. my point is he should have been a genius of the sword while his brother a genius of magic but you've described him as having less talent in the sword then rudeus in magic. I get its going to be a slow fic and you don't want make him unnecessarily op to quickly, but don't down play him and make him look weak with every encounter or fight he has.

Kenrio
KenrioLv10Kenrio

the love interest is gislaine and author make so other girls fall in love with rudeus even when mc interact with them too. with this alone you can see this is the type of fic where author is forcing the plot for them to love rudeus. anyone that read the novel know that a girl will never fall in love normally with rudeus, forget about how creepy perfect he is but his inferioty complex is massive. so if this was realistically writen I never see a girl choosing rudeus over the mc.

RookofBlack
RookofBlackLv4RookofBlack

it's one of those stories where the author regurgitates cannon while slapping on a "my oc was also there!!" sticker on it. not only that, but he's missing a lot of details that were relevant in cannon, and you can tell that it's not because of butterflies or it being an AU or something, it's just pure laziness. also, the character interactions are either cardboard in quality or nonexistent all together.

Alabado_sea_gonza
Alabado_sea_gonzaLv2Alabado_sea_gonza

it is literally short canon, poorly adapted, and somewhat mediocre. There is no character development, the mc and all the characters are completely flat, and there is not even intention to change that.

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Well, I can see that you change a bit of character personalities here and there. Good attempt, although it's there for a reason. Anyway, good luck. Not out of your normal twin with mc trope ff, but maybe there will be a change... Hope there is..

Muramasa_Zero
Muramasa_ZeroLv2Muramasa_Zero

I have a problem with this story, and being honest, if I had to compare it to the original story this one feels empty, but not an ordinary emptiness, a very deep emptiness. In my opinion moshoku tensei was not made to be told in a quick and summarized way, if I had to put it in a few words this novel does not have the essence of the original, there is no world development, there is no character development and if there is it is practically null, and here is where I repeat myself, moshoku tensei was not told in a quick way, it was told at its own pace, a pace that allowed to give personality and life to both the characters and the world something that I don't see anywhere in this fan-fic, and to finish this novel doesn't give me the same feeling as the original, it doesn't even make me want to dive into the story because I know it won't matter, and if I had to give a reason is mainly because there is no real conflict or difficulty or an impact that truly feels emotional and meaningful. Now the only good thing I saw was the initial concept of reincarnation with excalibur, that's the only thing I found interesting and a couple of other concepts such as immortality (of old age). And being honest what I like about these stories is to see how a new character will affect, what things will change and how severe the butterfly effect would be, and here the butterfly effect is noticeable but in a very negative way, it is as if the oc has stopped the mental advancement of all the characters or more specifically the growth as a person of each character. (or I just didn't feel that the characters really changed much throughout the story).

CasualDegenerate
CasualDegenerateLv3CasualDegenerate

Good so far but don’ make it harem maybe even no romance but still yeah just dont maybe.

El_Tobi0999
El_Tobi0999Lv3El_Tobi0999

The fanfiction would be better if the author removed Rudeus. Two kings can't live in one Mountain. (In my opinion) ..........................

SIYA
SIYALv4SIYA

author if your planning on re-writing this I will totally support you oh by the way I found this image somewhere... this is to me, What would Alex look like.

FrogGodKing
FrogGodKingLv4FrogGodKing

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

Bebert_D
Bebert_DLv1Bebert_D

Hopefully the story won't fully follow the storyline. Over-all the story is still in the introduction of the mc..... As a fan of Mushoku Tensei, I am curios of how the mc will act knowing the original storyline. From the six chapter I read, I see that the author use timeskip for the mc and change 'little' of the story. I wish for the author to focus more on the mc's plans and introduce some new character (hopefully).

Una_Chan
Una_ChanLv3Una_Chan

cool fanfic, the story is great so far. the mc is cool rudues isnt the usual rudeus we know who sufferd PTSD based on what ive read so far. i hope this fanfic continues and not dropped by the author

CyberBlancaX
CyberBlancaXLv3CyberBlancaX

Well this is new, never seen this anime turned into a fic

Migz_Nolasco_5290
Migz_Nolasco_5290Lv1Migz_Nolasco_5290

Author are you stopping dis novel or not cause its a waste if you are not going to continue your fanfic cause its really good 👍👍👍👍 i hope you continue dis fanfic

LuxE
LuxELv1LuxE

Великолепное произведение! ❤️😍 Великолепное произведение! ❤️😍 Великолепное произведение! ❤️😍 Великолепное произведение! ❤️😍 Великолепное произведение! ❤️😍 Великолепное произведение! ❤️😍 Великолепное произведение! ❤️😍 Великолепное произведение! ❤️😍 Шедевр.

TheUnderLord
TheUnderLordLv1TheUnderLord

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Selectials
SelectialsLv4Selectials

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Randomidiot2424242
Randomidiot2424242Lv13Randomidiot2424242

ever since eris became a love interest, the story started to get boring. And what's more, the love story between the protagonist and eris is super forced.unfortunately this fanfiction is not for me.

Achilles_Bahadur
Achilles_BahadurLv4Achilles_Bahadur

MC who follow the Canon. Hardly give any changes in story. MC who follow the Canon. Hardly give any changes in story. MC who follow the Canon. Hardly give any changes in story. MC who follow the Canon. Hardly give any changes in story.

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