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Birth of The Free Bird

นักเขียน: MortalLearner
Fantasy Romance
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What is Birth of The Free Bird

อ่านนิยาย Birth of The Free Bird โดย ผู้เขียน MortalLearner ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.“Do you still have my coin?” Asked Edmond in a low voice. Finch nodded. “It’s here.” She lifted her free hand and opened her fist, showing Edmond the coin that he gave her last night. The coin that s...

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“Do you still have my coin?” Asked Edmond in a low voice. Finch nodded. “It’s here.” She lifted her free hand and opened her fist, showing Edmond the coin that he gave her last night. The coin that she used as her marker during the game. “You have to keep it. We’ll play again soon.” Edmond promised. Finch nodded happily. Her smile broadened as she heard Edmond’s promise. “I’ll be waiting for you Edmond.” “I’ll come back for you.” He vowed. In the land of Easton, a few boys from the village started to visit the forest, after being encountered with a girl whose whole life was spent inside the forest. As they built friendship between them, the forest had turned into nothing but their new playground. Curiosity led to dangerous exploration, revealing the hidden secrets that were almost forgotten. When the news about the girl in the forest was heard by the Mayor, a hunt began. There was one thing that the girl was forbidden to do: never stepping out of the forest. As people started to look for her, would she be able to escape from them? Above of all, would she be able to save her dear friends? Who knew that the action of those innocent children would cause so many deaths in the land.

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Wild and free like a sea

"Open your beautiful almond eyes those are filled with tears by me, doll." he is making me vulnerable day by day. I didn't open my even he grabbed my hair, I just closed my eyes. The hairs on my back rose, and when his hot tongue Licking my tears from my neck I opened my eyes when he pulled my bandage with his teeth and placed wet kisses and he bit my bursie, and I screamed in pain. He raised his dark eyes to meet my brown eyes which were filled with tears.  "How sexy you look with your eyes shed tears and your pink plumpy lips covered with blood like acred lipstick." He traced my lips. "You will be the death of me." He is eating my upper lips, sucking blood. I just released my tears in pain. He kissed me until he was out of breath, he pulled me towards him until our breath mingled, and my soft button nose touched his nose.  "I'm getting addicted to biting your lips until there is no drop of blood left to suck. those tears which shed due to my assault on you're lips. You're making me crazy and feel heaven digging my nails in your delicate and smooth flesh," He pressed my body into him I could feel his rock chest with my soft body. I'm struggling in his firm hold, he can do anything to satisfy his demons. _______________________ Eesha Sharma a true, honest, and well-witted attorney, owns a leading law firm in the country. her father who was a corrupt politician, as well as owning an illegal business. fixed her marriage with a criminal to gain power and a higher position. Eesha plotted against his father by marrying one of his enemies to destroy her both enemies. just as people suggest, "Keep your family close but your enemies closer." Akash Mehta was her pawn in her game to gain the power to end her enemies. A cold-blooded criminal, who came from a criminal family. his family is the reason for snatching the person she loved, inspired, and her only weakness. The phrase "wild and free like a sea" evokes a sense of limitless freedom and untamed beauty. Just like the sea, nature possesses an innate wildness that cannot be contained or controlled. The sea, with its vastness and ever-changing nature, symbolizes the essence of freedom. It dances with the wind, crashing against the shore with unyielding force, creating a symphony of sound and motion. It is home to a myriad of creatures, each living their lives in harmony with the natural rhythms of the ocean. Like the sea, we too can embrace our wild side, casting off the constraints and expectations of society, and connecting with our true nature. To be wild and free like a sea is to embrace the unpredictable, explore uncharted territories, and live with a sense of awe and wonder. It is to embody the raw power and beauty of nature and to live life authentically, unapologetically, and in harmony with the world around us.

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James_readers
James_readersLv2James_readers

A wonderful, gripping and fascinating story! I’m absolutely hooked. This story reminds me of the Lord of The Flies. The characters and the plot are well developed! You just earned yourself a new fan! Well done, author!

binni_seon
binni_seonLv1binni_seon

The start is really good,the greatest strength of the author is not allowing the reader to get distracted as it keeps engaging one's anticipatory potential...keep writing

kyle_irish
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Padfayeper
PadfayeperLv1Padfayeper

I haven't finished the story yet but I can say that the story was well written. It has an amazing plot and the story develops just fine. I like how the author narrates the story for not all his/her words are common. The only thing that needs editing is the description. The story's description is not that thrilling (for me). I advice you add some questions that may awaken the readers' curiosity. But overall, the story's good.

Khawla_Amini
Khawla_AminiLv2Khawla_Amini

I just started reading the book, and I'm so hooked.. The plot is so interesting, each chapter lead to a new mysterious path .. So in love with this so far ❤

IntanM
IntanMLv1IntanM

Dark, mysterious, unpredictable, suspenseful and full of cliffhanger! This book would glue you to the screen. It’s not a romance at all, so don’t expect any romantic scenes but the story line is absolutely thrilling and beyond interesting. Absolutely recommended!

NakedApron
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But you're so talented, how do you only have 6k views?! I'm literally reading through the thing, trying to nitpick at something, so I can put it in the review, but the things you write are better than every other novel this site would ever produce. I hope you can finish the novel and send it to a publisher.

kakigori
kakigoriLv2kakigori

hey hey hey. here's your review: First off? The prologue. I absolutely love the opening paragraph. It just packs the right 'oomph', and not 'oomph' as in the cold open or 'haha gun go pew pew'. It fits thematically (which is something I'll be addressing in the next few paragraphs), and the description of the bird in question is very vivid. Forget just the first paragraph. Language aside, the entire prologue flows smoothly, and its sequence of events are woven together in a natural way. The death of the bird could be handled slightly better, but I get the intent behind it and that's all that really matters for now. There are a few anachronisms though. It's just the vitamin D thing - according to your synopsis, it takes place in the 1800s, but the first vitamin was discovered in 1912 (correct me if I'm wrong). It's a small issue and doesn't matter in the grand scheme of things, but I gotta pad this review out somewhat, eh? Again - I've mentioned this, like, two times in my past reviews. Writing good dialogue is the quickest way to get my interest, and you've written some pretty great dialogue here. Feels like actual, living kids are talking in chapter 2. The setting they're in fits as well - it gives off the vibe of this really rustic and quaint European town somewhere in the 1800s, which I gather is precisely what you were going for. Well done. That's my review. I hope it helped you out!

Anotoki
AnotokiLv11Anotoki

Honestly, the book is promising for those who love mystery and dark stories, I think. I like the way you didn't put a lot of information on the first few chapters. Keep up the good work author!

Yaminoyosei
YaminoyoseiLv12Yaminoyosei

It starts very nicely and the end definitely intruigs you to read more. The writing style seems very nice in the first chapters and the theme is intresting. Good job!

Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

Lovely cover page! The title is excellent (I know how difficult is to create a titile that inkston would accept, etc...). It makes me inquisitive... about the content. That's a big part of success as writers say. From the synopisis looks that you have an attractive idea. That's another (bigggg) plus for you. The first thing, I noticed while reading your story, was the language. Good one! You don't struggle, like most of us (not english speaking) with tenses, style or grammar. I like the way you describe things, places, etc... it's so easy to read and it's a pleasue to do that. The storyline is interesting, characters are expressive. You're doing great job!

SolAce
SolAceLv3SolAce

A fascinatingly dark, mystery novel filled to the brim with intrigue and a well-thought out plot. Added to library immediately. One of the things I would like to say is my emotions got influenced just by reading this, which rarely happens. Usually my emotions would only get stirred up by comedy novels, but I felt a strange sense of attachment to this one, spurring me to read more than I would have. There are a few, consistent grammar errors, namely run-on sentences as well as misspelled verbs in wrong tenses. I tried to point out a few, but if you could comb through it later and correct most of it, I would be happy to change my review to 5 stars ! All in all, I would definitely recommend this book ! So keep up the hard work, Author !

Whendhie1
Whendhie1Lv3Whendhie1

I love magic and romance in one book . Lol. Just read the first chapters and I'm loving it. I think I'm really going to enjoy reading this. Keep up the good work author. 👍

H41
H41Lv2H41

I really like how this story is written, I haven't seen a lot of novels like this one. The way it's written stands out to me. Great job author! Keep it up! :)

cloudybarks
cloudybarksLv2cloudybarks

What a story! I was absolutely thrilled and fascinated. The forest and the girl really hooked me into oblivion. Great work! The plot is well maintained. Can’t wait to read more.

LaylaClark
LaylaClarkLv2LaylaClark

A very well narrated story of adventure fantasy. This is a good book with a lot of potential. The characters are unique and loveable. So flowing and amazing.

ChloeWang
ChloeWangLv2ChloeWang

I love the premise of the story. It is narrated very well. Dark but innocent. What an adventure. Finch is my favourite character! This would appeal to YA readers. Well done.

Shelley_G
Shelley_GLv2Shelley_G

Cliffhanger! The story blew my mind. An amazing story that sucked me into a world of such imagination. The plot is flowing perfectly. Highly recommend!

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

What a wonderful novel! It was a nice reading experience for me. Having a long chapter was great! I have seen typos but it will be corrected if you proofread it. The narration was splendid and I enjoyed it. Gotta review it with five stars! Kudos author!

Cher_Yan
Cher_YanLv1Cher_Yan

Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️

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