what can i say about this story? it is my daily, or almost daily, enjoyment...
I like it very much, the characters and the worlds are all good and worked in a pleasant way, well enough talk and let's go for an analysis.
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WRITING: When we talk about it it is kind of difficult because English is not my native language, I am Brazilian, and I read through the Google translator, but here there are not many mistakes when making the translation so I believe it is written in a good way.
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POSTS: at first the story is daily, or was meant to be. There are weeks that chapter is posted every day and others that are every other day. It is not a bad frequency even more because the chapters are of a decent size, but I would like to read more often.
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DEVELOPMENT: I personally liked the development of the story, it is neither slow nor fast, the character follows his goal without getting too far out of the way or embellishing things. I still feel a hole here or there where it could be better worked or that got a little confused but everything can be disregarded if you see the work as a whole.
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CHARACTER: The main character is well done and there are no apparent personality fluctuations, he persists with the same "ideas" he had at the beginning. I liked how it is worked and interacts with the secondary. I don't know much what to say besides that it's well done kkk
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WORLD: Well, there are more than one kkk world. Speaking more generally, the worlds are not explored much because this is not the premise of the main character, he doesn't want to know what is going on rest of the world and is only interested in his women. I must say that it didn't make much difference to me until recently until the danmachi arc started. Honestly I would like to see them migrate to this world and work on it from there, I think it is a world that has much more details and a greater portfolio of events that can be worked on to enrich your story ....
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Well this is what I think about the story, my final analysis?
VERY WORTH READING, it's easily in my top 3 fanfics here on the webnovel
