Garland

Then what is the overall point of it being a crossover then or even a fanfic? Do you write a fanfic and all you do is just follow the plot? Do you even know what the point of a fanfic is? If you put a character in a story and their existence does nothing at all to change anything, then there overall existence wouldn't have even mattered and there is no point in even adding them. It just boggles my mind that that is your response to my review.

Hah, still the same childish attitude as always. Get a negative review and you go throw insults. Now you are calling me gay? Why? Got tired of always insulting my mom and how you fuck her? Blah blah blah, your work and patreon paywalled antics just goes to show who you really are

Well well well, if it isn't Z...looks like you are back and posting stories again. From Summary alone, I already see how its the same writing style again. Just like the Synopsis, its messy as the chapters which are just full of complete paragraphs with no structure or pacing. Its a little improvement compared to the complete nonsense and terrible form of writing you did in the past but that even leaves much to be desired. Yeah sure there is no Paywall but really how can we expect as maybe future stories, you will put paywall again. You already formed a reputation even in this Webnovel for Paywalling Fanfic stories that aren't even that good.

Yeah time for him to meet the UA girls

Yeah finally you are back. I thought that this story was pretty much abandoned. With the end of My Hero, i wonder what your plans for this story is going to be.

I guess I expected much. I thought that this rewrite would actually fix Kenichi's overall character but he is just the same generic nice guy. The only thing pretty much is just some added scenarios overall with no major actual changes. Kenichi is still a boring MC, some characters like Rito are turned into weirdos just to push the girls to the MC and again information is just explained terribly. Thought that the author could finally make a Side MC story in a Harem Work but it just didn't but turn him into the actual MC in a Harem.

What a lame ass story. Completely boring with the MC practically doing nothing but sitting at the side and just letting Ainz do everything. Pretty much just him being a tagalong to everything. How dull.

I love Midnight but come on, when are we going to the next girl. Its been Midnight back to back. Even his own Girlfriend hasn't had this much chapter length.

It started alright but man did the MC just completely destroy the story. His personality is just so annoying and is just a complete hypocrit at times at the extreme level.

Despite how interesting its whole story is, execution is completely terrible. The whole story is completely changing and just happens so quick. It goes here, it goes there and just completely abandons pacing. Not enough chapters and suddenly he goes to another world. The MC is also kinda boring and really not that interesting overall.