The First Store System
Bonus Chapter Goals for August!
Power Stones Bonus:
200 PS: +1 Chapter,
500 PS: +1
1000 PS: +1
2000 PS: +1
5000 PS: +1
These are weekly goals, so if the book gets more than 5000 PS, I will upload a bonus of five chapters, plus the normal updates, on Monday of the following week from the week in which we met the goal.
Golden Tickets Bonus:
For every 200 Golden Tickets, I will upload a bonus chapter with no limits to it. These will be uploaded in the next month on top of the normal update and PS bonus chapters.
Gift Bonus:
Dragon: +1 Chapter,
Magic Castle: +2 Chapter,
Spaceship: +5 Chapter,
Golden Gachapon: +10 Chapter.
These chapters will be updated in the same week on top of normal updates and previous bonus chapter goal rewards.
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A strange store that sells everything suddenly appears in the town. The Owner of the store is a young man and anyone who tried to mess with him %$#@.
The products of the store are expensive, yet the queue outside the store never stops.
"So what, If you're an Emperor? I'll fight to the death with you if you try to break the queue."
These scenes outside the store were daily occurrences.
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pinaka_ · Fantasy
What kills me about this novel is the amount of filler, the existing world building is just paragraph after paragraph of describing things that have no relevance to the current plot, while the narrative itself is moving at a snails pace due to literally describing the world rather than showing it to us through the story development. The author really does not understand the concept of show don't tell. If that weren't bad enough he repeats the same boring exposition multiple times.