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this is good, no Chinese nationalism, racism, or anythingism, but one teensy issue is it reads like a tumblr post sometimes

This is interesting. But its just like any other novel that has a shop owner thats either o.p, or o.p assistants. Also, this is 'fake deep'--has arcs that touches upon a persons desires and the flaws with said desire/wish, followed by the consequences and resolution. Even though it may look as if it has a deeper meaning, it doesnt; its pretentious and corny. Its like a feminist female whale who posts quotes on tumblr about life isnt always fair, and love isnt always sweet. But instead of a quote, and a feminist female whale, its a novel written by a 20-30 year old beta-cuck-edge lord, who spent too much time on tumblr and instagram.

Your writing is excellent, and I was wondering if you would mind giving you some advice on how to improve your tale. @annafigueroa on Tumblr @Figueroa__Anna on Twitter @Figuero244 on Pinterest

Overall mid read slow but grammar is good and the way the story is told is great but main downside is that nothing interesting happens to the Mc since he acts acts like a observer not involving himself to the event unfolding around him while acting smug which is comparable to Chinese wuxia Mc's in short arrogant without care for consequences of his action like everyone else is beneath him.