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Paper Hearts: You are mine

Love is monopolies, is madness, is bigotry "Please let me go." "You are mine, I will never let you go." "Go to hell, I hate you." "If I have to go to hell, you have to come down with me."

QuynhGiangg · Urban

PAPER WALKER

Chen Du, 28, inherits a traditional paper craftsman's shop from his missing master. When the paper figures in his shop begin to move—when the dead refuse to stay buried—he discovers he is the last Soul Walker: a practitioner who guides lost souls to peace using ancient paper crafts. But Paper Soul Hall, an organization that trades in human souls, wants him dead. And his own master's soul is trapped inside a paper figure in his shop, waiting to be saved.

Bo_Cui · Horror

His Paper Bride

Ella, a determined and resilient young woman, is thrust into a world of challenges and unexpected opportunities after her father's betrayal by his closest friend and business partner. Desperate to restore her family's lost comfort, Ella immerses herself in a high-stakes job at a prestigious company, working directly under the enigmatic CEO, Ben. When circumstances lead to a contract marriage between them, Ella faces a crucial decision: to sacrifice her freedom for financial stability or embrace a life-altering partnership with her aloof boss. As their unconventional marriage unfolds, Ella navigates a tumultuous relationship with Ben, who remains guarded and distant, causing emotional turmoil and self-doubt. Despite enduring humiliation and mistreatment, Ella finds strength in her resolve to succeed and provide for her loved ones. When Ben unexpectedly reveals his vulnerability and confesses his love for her on the eve of their contract's end, Ella must confront her feelings and decide the future of their relationship. Through perseverance and unwavering determination, Ella and Ben embark on a journey of healing and personal growth, forging a genuine bond built on trust and mutual respect. As they navigate the complexities of their evolving connection, they discover the transformative power of love, forgiveness, and second chances. Together, they embark on a new chapter of their lives, embracing the promise of a harmonious and fulfilling future. Amidst a backdrop of betrayal, ambition, and redemption, Ella and Ben's intertwined destinies culminate in a poignant tale of resilience, compassion, and the enduring pursuit of happiness and fulfillment in the face of adversity.

ElaraNoctis · Urban

Bound by paper, Burned by love

When struggling baker Serena Blake meets billionaire Elias Moreau, she’s shocked by his blunt offer: a one-year contract marriage in exchange for half a million dollars. For Elias, it’s the only way to secure his inheritance. For Serena, it’s a lifeline to save her family’s failing bakery. What begins as a cold business arrangement soon turns into a dangerous game of emotions, where blurred lines, hidden pasts, and unexpected passion threaten to rewrite the rules of their deal—and their hearts.

Omopo_Ifeoluwa · Fantasy

Paper Hearts

Tragedy can strike anywhere and at any moment, to anyone. In a moment life can change. It can leave you so drastically altered as to leave you with permanent scars. Meet Jaxsen Michaels and Sebastian Green. A parentless child and a fatherless son each get a chance to have the family that was lost to them both as they get to know one another and help each other past the darkness of each of their pasts with love and patience. This is book one of three.

Catherine MacKenzie · LGBT+

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