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Asked you to write a book, not to confess your criminal record!

Lin Chuan, a struggling writer, finally got his golden finger—the Career Life Experience System. Randomly experiencing a profession, after the experience is over, novels will be generated based on Lin Chuan's experiences. But Lin Chuan found that the professions he experienced were all too sketchy! Swindler, Assassin, Hacker, Touch Gold Captain... Corresponding novels were born: “Swindler,” “Hacker Kingdom,” “Touch Gold Notes,” and others came into existence. Before he knew it, his works became popular. Selected reader comments: “This book describes things too realistically, this is definitely an autobiography!” “With you confessing and me confessing, Mr. Lin will end up in prison sooner or later.” “Author Lin Chuan (×), Suspect Mr. Lin (√)” Unexpectedly, the reader's prophecy has come true! The police showed up, “We suspect you're involved in serious illegal and criminal activities!” Lin Chuan, “Huh?” The police, “The crimes in your novels, they're your actual deeds, right?” Lin Chuan's vision went dark. Done for, I've written myself into the station, but I'm really not a criminal suspect!!!!!!

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How to re-write the Evil Stepmother

As she walked back to her room, her mind raced. "Oh no. I'm inside a novel. This novel," she thought, panic bubbling beneath her composed exterior. She was living in the world of the book she had been so engrossed in, reincarnated as the character everyone loved to hate. Determined to survive and rewrite her fate, Amelia resolved to navigate this treacherous new world with care. She would use her knowledge of the novel to her advantage, starting with maintaining her new persona as the overly friendly, reformed stepmother. And perhaps, just perhaps, she might even find a way to win the cold duke's heart.

BananaPeel_Group · History

the regressor who can re write reality

THE REGRESSOR WHO CAN REWRITE REALITY The day the world ended... Armin died Cities fell overnight Humanity was hunted to the brink of extinction by terrifying mutations and in the end even hope was erased But death was not the end Armin awakens on the very first day of the apocalypse carrying memories of a future where everyone he loved was slaughtered and humanity was annihilated This time he refuses to let history repeat itself Armed with the mysterious Book of Grammarry an artifact capable of rewriting reality itself Armin begins changing the future one event at a time Yet every change creates an even greater ripple Monsters evolve years before they should Forgotten horrors awaken too early The future he once knew is collapsing before his eyes Elsewhere a mysterious young man named Eren searches the ruined world for his younger sister Possessing monstrous strength and an unknown past he soon collides with awakened warriors hidden noble bloodlines and enemies powerful enough to shake nations As humanity fights for survival an unimaginable truth is revealed The apocalypse was never an accident It is the opening move of a cosmic game orchestrated by gods Ancient beings watch from beyond reality Divine crystals awaken extraordinary powers Towers pierce the heavens Dimensional gates tear open the fabric of the world And every survivor is nothing more than a player in a game where entire universes are treated as entertainment To save humanity Armin must rewrite destiny itself But lurking at the end of every possible future stands the greatest nightmare of all the being who once exterminated mankind... a man who was once Armin's closest friend In a world where reality can be rewritten, fate itself has become the greatest enemy The game has begun

aoikun · Fantasy

I Shall Write My Own Destiny!

"Prophecies are meant to be fulfilled. This one was meant to be erased." At the end of Kali Yuga, the world waits for Kalki—the divine avatar fated to end the age of darkness. But fate has fractured. A new force walks the earth. Not born of prophecy. Not blessed by gods. An anomaly—unrecorded, unpredicted, unstoppable. He wears silence like armor. His past, a ghost. His strength, immeasurable. And wherever he walks, the lines of destiny begin to tremble. Some whisper he’s a myth reborn. Others fear he’s a warning written too late. But all will soon understand: He was never meant to exist… and yet, he is here. And he brings with him only one vow: “I Shall Write My Own Destiny!.”

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