lancelot and guinevere

Listennnnnnnnnn....... the past three chapters are super hilarious.. literal tears😭😭😭🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂.. Guinevere and Agnes are going head to head.. Guinevere has a slight edge over Agnes at this time. ..😂😂😂.. Can't wait to see what the Knotty Omega will write.. sitting and anxiously awaiting the next chapters.. Thank you author for your play on words and scenes.. I'm thoroughly captivated... 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Its a nice story concept and its not that bad of a story however I believe you could have done much better. You should have researched more about the other characters since there are many inconsistencies. Firstly Merlin should have already been in his tower in Avalon since this should be the end of Artoria's reign. Vortigern also should have been defeated and killed considering canon Artoria was able to kill him I dont see how this OP Artoria would not be able to, I also find it hard to believe that some of the Knights of the Round would turn on Artoria there would have at least some that were loyal to her like Bedivere who if I recall was still loyal to him till his death. Lancelot also had no motive of betraying Artoria since the reason he betrayed her was because of his secret relationship with Guinevere so Artoria was forced to have her executed because if she didnt it would distabilise her reign with people having the opinion that shes weak willed, etc. Her political enemies would see that as a weakness that they could use against her. The reason Lancelot even recklessly attacked was because Guinevere would have been executed so he went and attacked which led to several deaths. Also wouldnt the rumors of her not being able to understand emotions not exist? You could have also started Artoria in the modern era like you wanted judging by your sypnosis and have the past events in like flashback in dreams if you want to be vague on what happened during her reign that way you dont need much research.

Already read on FF net. Totally love the story 👍👍 It would be great, if Guinevere show interest on shirou . Hopefully saber will show her 'jealous' and 'possessive' side more.

Pretty good! Though the Gawain/Guinevere switching is a bit irritating. Is there a link to the RAW version? Not at least giving credit to the original is pretty bad (alas too common amongst translators).

The image of guinevere realizing the man she told to hide was actually the high king had me grinning. 😭 the timing the tension, and the embarrassment were perfect. The auction scene is still living rent-free in my head the escalating bids, the reactions in the hall and then that urn reveal i could practically see everyone is faces. What keeps me reading is not just the romance though Its the way guinevere carries herself even when she is outnumbered she is constantly adapting instead of folding by chapter 73 i was surprisingly invested in velkaris itself which makes every political threat hit harder i genuinely need to know what happens next. I feel like if readers started sharing their mental images of guinevere, maddox, and the dragons the discussions would be incredibly fun to follow somewhere like instagram or discord. 📌 Discord: anniearts 📌 Instagram: anniebixel