profanity example

An interesting story. You are an excellent example of an author, who beautifully shows how you can write er°tica without violence, profanity, and with some taste and tact. Great work author!

Read upto three chapters. And there is only one thing here : Profanity.

Why is system saying "profanity alert" or something and then punish mc? Mc is just asking questions .. its very annoying to read when mc ask then system answer "profanity alert number 1,2,3 random lighting punishment" its not funny at all and mc is just slave to system.. mission here and there then if mission failed punishment is death? tsk tsk.

So far (the first chapter ) it’s quite good at least better then mine and I like the use of the profanity and language to demonstrate his surprise and excitement. Also since you’re (the author) is already useing profanity why don’t u add a bit in the beginning of the next chapter confirming his gender and I think you know what I mean by that wink* wink*

1. Repetitive plot This novel has repetitive plot . Prove yourself .. rising .. success .. betrayed .. failing .. revenge .. face smuking But THIS IS best novel with repetitive plot you cannot bored by repetitive of this novel 2. Strong Nationalism This novel has strong Nationalism and negative perspective to American Japan and Korea , Sometimes it is too much and unreal But it is not racist and from chinese viewpoint I can understand it, So be it 3. Slang , Chinese Profanity As novel reader I read translate chinese novel for more than 30years and seen many chinese profanity. , But Beijing Slang is so eye opening , I promise that every chapter of this Novel will full of Slang Swear and Profanity I promise ... your sister!