feet plural form

please get an editor, while i didnt see any spelling errors which makes me happy, the sentence structure is awful. also please check to make sure that you arent trying to make a wors that doesnt have a plural form into a plural word. preys should just be prey, i didnt see it but please dont use equipments just equipment, etc

Very good story, its a shame the sentence building is lackluster tbh, if the grammar was better i would have this a 5/5. The problem is that in the novel, the selection of words and their variations in a sentence makes it sometimes hard to understand what the author wants to say. For example the author writes several times, - he thinks he make good. Or something similar instead of " he though that he did good". The thing is that the variations of a word can mean completely different things, for example foot and feet, 1 is plural and 1 is singular or thinking and though, 1 is present and 1 is past. If the author can get some help on that part I think this novel will be brilliant

WILL THIS COME BACK FROM THE DEAD? IF NOT THAN IT NEEDS TO BE 9 FEET UNDER!0 WILL THIS COME BACK FROM THE DEAD? IF NOT THAN IT NEEDS TO BE 9 FEET UNDER! WILL THIS COME BACK FROM THE DEAD? IF NOT THAN IT NEEDS TO BE 9 FEET UNDER! WILL THIS COME BACK FROM THE DEAD? IF NOT THAN IT NEEDS TO BE 9 FEET UNDER!

noce work man One feet is 23cm, one zhang is 10 feet, which is 2.3m. Yi Yun’s Thousand Army Saber’s blade is 6 feet long, which is 1.38m. With the hilt, the entire saber is 7 feet 2 inches long, which is 1.65m. It is taller than twelve-year-old Yi Yun’s height.

You should edit the title , Children is the plural from child ... I alredy know what to expect from this only from reading the title 😂