reincarnation colosseum

MiuNovel’s writing brings you to another world. Enjoyed the colosseum scene. Not that much gore but the scene is described colourfully. Easy to imagine the world.

Firstly, why did he destroy the Colosseum? He could have escaped after destroying Family 24, and the cursed slave would have been nothing more than a character who died tragically against the Stone Rank 5, not a character who was able to orchestrate the destruction of the Colosseum and possess explosives. The Duke might have revealed this information, no matter how self-sufficient he was... and this was a fatal mistake that proved itself later, as Rei did not die, meaning his case was reopened since he did not die with the destruction of the Colosseum... This was a fatal, foolish mistake (his attempt to destroy the Colosseum)... Secondly, why did he summon the S-Class guards by destroying his shop, like Moderate, the old merchant? They tightened the noose around him and revealed the mixed-race boy involved, claiming that the perpetrator was indeed a single individual, even though the facts didn't match. Around 70 people, led by Logan and his associates, participated in destroying the nobleman's house... a blatant disregard for the facts... If he hadn't summoned them by blowing up his shop and had managed to sell his stock at the market, it would have been a success... but he didn't even achieve his goal and didn't sell anything... In short, the entire Dark Market arc was just to obtain that seed for developing new tendencies, nothing more... and that wasn't worth all the trouble... in addition to stealing all the vaults for the auction, but that wasn't worth the effort either... he was already short on materials before the destruction. The noble house, after being revived in the Colosseum as a soulless entity... then he acquired resources... so why the greed... to go all that way to sell items and loot, only to fail completely and obtain nothing but a seed, while attracting the attention of the S-Class Guardians and preferring to portray Rei as a cursed boy rather than a miserable Colosseum player... In short, I've reached the arc immediately after the Dark Market and I believe that if he hadn't destroyed the Colosseum and summoned the S-Class Guardians by blowing up his shop... Also, the atmosphere of the story is quite lonely... although the level of intrigue and intelligence is good for all the players... Even the narrative style and the third-person perspective, instead of Rei telling everything from his own point of view, which would make it feel cliché, is a real strength for you as an author... I really liked his time as a slave and even the destruction of the noble family

Interesting concept so far, I've read up till chapter 34 so what is to be said going forward is only relevant up till those chapters. Recommendations to the author: 1. Get someone to edit your chapters, doesn't have to be a professional editor. In fact, you could also pass it through an application that checks that type of thing automatically. Some misspelled words that are fundamental to the stories development and world background, such as Devine (Divine). As well as some normal misspelling, like: rediculous instead of ridiculous and their when it should be there. Anyways, those are some ****** examples. 2. Fix some verb tenses to match with the correct english grammar to make the story flow better. 3. Would recommend an overhaul on your sentence structures to make them "smoother". Example, instead of "It was summer. The sun was hot and bright. In the Wissian town there was a colosseum. In the colosseum a fight is happenning between the two magicians. The crowd is cheering for their respective supporting fighters" It was summer and the sun was shining strongly upon the colosseum located in the town of Wissian; where two magicians where currently dueling making the crowd go wild, while cheering for their favored fighter. Excuse my grammar mistakes, even though I am criticizing I am not necessarily a good writer. I think that if you made those corrections your story would be so much better. Nevertheless, it's a very interesting story which I will continue to read since it has got interesting concepts and . So kudos to the author.