rwby weiss schnee

I decided to give this rating to help the author at the beginning, so I can change it in the future. So far the writing is reasonable and the story is progressing well, as is the world-building around it. I hope the author doesn't give up on it because I'm enjoying it. (I also liked that the protagonist is Whitley Schnee).

ist gold , the character arent plain ,a good devolopment ,, good humor , this jacques dont have the pedo mustache and over all fo the rest sasuga jacques sama

I think it will be better for a Single pairing, and with Weiss Schnee if you can. They're quite similar if you think about it. And that pairing could help with the goal that Weiss wanted to do to the SDC company, fixing it's work ethic. And the ensuing drama would be epic too. Why not Blake? Because it's repeatedly stated by Blake in the early Volume that her relationship with Adam is a student and mentor. But somehow that's all is thrown away and Adam is changed from a Terrorist leader that cares about his subordinates, to a pathetic psychotic yandere ex-boyfriend. And no, don't replace Jaune with Adam, that's just lazy writing. Instead what you should do is try to integrate Adam with the main character of RWBY without eclipsing the main character potential to grow as a character. My suggestion is, instead of having Adam joined the Beacon, just keep him in the White Fang. But instead of submitting fully to Cinder, he only joins her for the sake of his subordinates safety, (Just like in the series the first time Cinder meet him) to silently protect the RWBY main character from the cover of White Fang, and to wait patiently to backstab Cinder. (Preferably during the fall of Beacon, so that Pyrha can be saved). But the main character of RWBY including Blake didn't know this at first but will gradually understand Adam. This will make Adam W Taurus into a cool misunderstood anti hero like Itachi Uchiha, with the Intention of saving as many RWBY main character as possible. And I think that is the most suitable route for Adam. He will be the Anti hero to Ruby Heroism.

I assure you I have not been disappointed with this novel so far, Salem has now for cinders sister as a replacement The author had made jaquese schnee Weiss father, the villan. And all the girls are going to fight, Yang especially I expect to be pissed I hope that they all make up and that they all share the mc. That is my hope anyway. Thanks for the story my good man don't drop this book

The kingbuild and crossover aspects are really well done, even the OCs are growing on me. I would enjoy a smaller harem, though, with less relationships each with more "screen time". But since weiss is too cute with her broken/brocon mind I can look past it. My fav rwby ff and top 3 overall ff