2 Chapter 1: A desperate retreat!

During a long battle on coruscant the jedi Anakin Skywalker and Obi wan kenobi had defeated Count Dooku and taken Palpatine to safety they then managed to escape the destroyer and rescued Palpatine from General Grievous.

As of right now the Republic fleets bombard Grievous ship severely damaging his ship. In a desperate attempt he ordered that they go through hyperspace but....

1. B1 droid pilot: Um, sir we shouldn't use the hyperdrive.

Grievous: WHY NOT!

2. B1 droid pilot: Well sir there seems to be some sort of vortex right in front of the ship.

Grievous: IT DOESN'T MATTER ACTIVATE THE HYPERDRIVE!

1. B1 droid pilot: But sir the ship could be split in half or even be destro-

Grievous slaps the droid pilots head off.

Grievous: I DO NOT CARE ACTIVATE. THE. HYPERDRIVE!

Feared of the general, the droids active the hyperdrive immediately

In doing so they instantly go through the vortex and it seemed that they were sent to an unknown location.

Grievous: Droids, where are we?

2. B1 droid pilot: It seems like we are lost.

3. B1 droid pilot: Yeah we are in an unknown location, we cannot even make contact to any other separatist ship.

Grievous: What about this ship?

2. B1 droid pilot: Well the ship is badly damaged, we won't be able to use the hyperdrive again. Also we may need to land on the planet to conserve power to the ship.

Grievous: Very well then, land the ship to an open space.

I hope you enjoy reading so far I will keep updating but it will take some time to make this story so, do be patient.

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