weiss schnee abused fanfiction

I assure you I have not been disappointed with this novel so far, Salem has now for cinders sister as a replacement The author had made jaquese schnee Weiss father, the villan. And all the girls are going to fight, Yang especially I expect to be pissed I hope that they all make up and that they all share the mc. That is my hope anyway. Thanks for the story my good man don't drop this book

empty plot, empty characters, empty relationships. In all of the fanfiction, only the initial idea of a distorted love between Weiss and Aegis is interesting, a distorted love rather than an ordinary one. But even you failed by making your hero another typical garbage and I never saw his love for Weiss about which you wrote in the beginning. And a see only a typical garbage MC who will replenish the harem after any first meeting

Not gonna attempt to read a dxd fanfic where the Gremory, THE GREMORY, abandoned or abused or treated the mc as a failure. That's not even fanfiction ar a Alternative Universe since the are one of the few caring devils of their own subordinates muchless there own family. And for those who are about to whine uselessly that this is a fanfiction or Alternative Universe.. it is not. Because for it to be a fanfiction of the original it HAS to be based off the original.

I decided to give this rating to help the author at the beginning, so I can change it in the future. So far the writing is reasonable and the story is progressing well, as is the world-building around it. I hope the author doesn't give up on it because I'm enjoying it. (I also liked that the protagonist is Whitley Schnee).