vampire with woman

It needs a rewrite but the premise is good boy is made into vampire wants to do good joins **** titans that's all well and good but it needs more thinking and seemed rushed honestly I'd kind of make the mc a true born vampire of a human woman like blade with all the strengths of a vampire with none of the weaknesses except maybe magic and complete atomic destruction

The bloody red hair of that beautiful woman in your book cover caught my attention, before I start reading it, I was expecting another vampire story, but then, oh boy. I was totally wrong.

looks like a promising story. 3 chapters is too less to form an opinion for a review but the story is smooth. a 20th century woman reborn in as a 16th century woman in a noble's family seems interesting. the shock and the difference in culture and the attitude is beautifully portrayed. but where did the vampire come all of a sudden? hmmm. have to see in the forthcoming chapters.

your dear author is victor gonna make his mom his woman or what and as he can make other sub species can he a blood wyvern or a vampire that is not affected by the sun pls elaborate

Actually really good, the writing is descriptive yet not in the overcomplicated way, the dialogue is very nicely done and actually funny to a point, liking the interactions between the mc and the vampire woman. Keep on going author, very promising!