volturi demetri

The narrative technique is well thought of and the character design is executed and presented nicely. A fun and delicate read, am looking forward to knowing more about Demetri. This story is worth reading!!! Author did a wonderful job on world background 🙌

The plot is too forced,like really 36 chapters,ultra slow paced release,and you force the plot with the wishes.Just get it going.Also why not finish the **** wolf plot,then mix it between originals,twilight,like have Volturi come for mc and his alpha friends,and he is forced to gather allies,to finally kill volturi.

It is a self proclamation. Trying to write something.I plan to complete this part with in 24 chapter. If this successful, I will make a part two. Story skelton already planned. Just waiting for some review. If two books are successful then I will write prequel to twilight including children of the moon and volturi

Honestly it's a pretty good Twilight fan-fic. I like OP mc and the mc indeed OP but he's too OP and not doing anything with those power. The fact that he somehow a descendant of Ymir and "stronger" than even Odin, the All Father and he still let the story played out with the Volturi. Seriously, if you're a 100 foot tall ice giant with power greater than Odin and just breathe and all the Volturi will die, doesn't even matter if any of them was an immortal child or not, it's vampire versus literal ice giant, a being greater than god. Also the reveal of his power should be closer to the end because the rest just feels like fillers when it happens in the middle of the fan-fic.

chapter 1 was a great intro... but then came chapter 2 and its garbage.... he's a hybrid wolf vampire and he goes voluntarily to the Volturi, and voluntarily becomes Aro's butt slave for 200 years... he apparently could've broke out anytime, but would rather not have them chase him all over the world...