demetri volturi

Stealing the Heart of Lady MARIBELLE

m3gah1tss

2019-11-03

The plot is too forced,like really 36 chapters,ultra slow paced release,and you force the plot with the wishes.Just get it going.Also why not finish the **** wolf plot,then mix it between originals,twilight,like have Volturi come for mc and his alpha friends,and he is forced to gather allies,to finally kill volturi.

Teen Wolf The Argent

Boxer_Vivek · Fantasy

80 Chs

Xander1987

2023-04-04

It is a self proclamation. Trying to write something.I plan to complete this part with in 24 chapter. If this successful, I will make a part two. Story skelton already planned. Just waiting for some review. If two books are successful then I will write prequel to twilight including children of the moon and volturi

EVENING STAR

Xander1987 · Book&Literature

9 Chs

LinhMieu

2023-02-01

Honestly it's a pretty good Twilight fan-fic. I like OP mc and the mc indeed OP but he's too OP and not doing anything with those power. The fact that he somehow a descendant of Ymir and "stronger" than even Odin, the All Father and he still let the story played out with the Volturi. Seriously, if you're a 100 foot tall ice giant with power greater than Odin and just breathe and all the Volturi will die, doesn't even matter if any of them was an immortal child or not, it's vampire versus literal ice giant, a being greater than god. Also the reveal of his power should be closer to the end because the rest just feels like fillers when it happens in the middle of the fan-fic.

Reborn in Twilight as a Werebear

Anomander_Adaar · Movies

86 Chs

skulputulurubug

2022-06-28

chapter 1 was a great intro... but then came chapter 2 and its garbage.... he's a hybrid wolf vampire and he goes voluntarily to the Volturi, and voluntarily becomes Aro's butt slave for 200 years... he apparently could've broke out anytime, but would rather not have them chase him all over the world...

Hybrid In Twilight

Just_authorsama · Movies

8 Chs

The president said I was his ancestor

She was the number one assassin on the ranking list. She had killed countless people and had never lost. She was the assassin with the highest bounty in the imperial court, and she would only stop when she saw blood. She was the female devil of the Great Wei Dynasty who could make people's expressions change at the mere mention of her. When such a person transmigrated to a modern civilized society, Zhao Miao felt the pressure of employment for the first time in his life. But it didn't matter. It wasn't a big problem. It was just a small scene. Why are there cameras everywhere? Then why not be a martial arts sparring partner? What, do you need all the documents? It would be best if it was a certificate issued by the state? Then I'll Baidu the Assassin's League and get back to my old job, right? It wasn't easy to find one, but it was all cosplay? Zhao Miao finally felt a headache. If she really couldn't do it, she could only use the trick that all women had since ancient times. That was to find an honest man to marry. Ye Zhizhen felt a chill on his back. He kept feeling that a big pot was coming from a very far place and was about to accurately hit his head. So, when could he let the woman who had escaped from the mental hospital travel back to his own era? Wait a minute, why is this psychopath getting cuter and cuter the more I look at him?

Mi Xiangjun

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Wuxia: It's time for Dalang to take his medicine

When Xu Liang opened his eyes again, he saw a woman holding a bowl of medicine and calling out for Dalang to take his medicine. What is going on…(In the pugilistic world, the lives of the weak are like weeds, while the lives of the strong are like immortals and gods. When he enters the world, the waves of the world will be shocking!)

A confused white mouse

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Mrs. Fu is a ruthless person

[Su Liao's sweet pet, 1v1, double virgin, strong man, strong woman, vest, big boss] Everyone said that Tangxi was a monster because she was different in the day and at night. Someone saw her wandering on the streets in the middle of the night like a lonely ghost! Only Fu Lishen said that Tang Xi was very beautiful at night. Her bloodthirsty eyes were very beautiful. She was like a child curled up in a corner, eating a lollipop and counting the stars. She was very beautiful when she held a knife and gritted her teeth, especially when…she was the most beautiful when she called him Brother Shen… Before meeting Fu Lishen, Tang Xi never thought that she would climb out of the mud one day. After meeting Fu Lishen, Tang Xi felt that Fu Lishen was her light and her salvation. She would put down the knife when she heard his name. She never bought lollipops herself again because Fu Lishen would buy lollipops that tasted better than hers. She would sleep defenseless in his arms until dawn… "Candy Baby," he said,"we're both people who struggled out of hell on earth. We have to be warm to each other for the rest of our lives." "Is a lifetime enough?" she asked with a smile. "Not enough. I have to live forever." - The beautiful and valiant female president of a fashion group who doesn't say much vs. the big shot of a consortium who is on the verge of breaking down people every day (This book is also known as Mr. Fu, You Were the One Who Was Touched First.)

Senior Sister Miejue

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Quickly wear the female system's beloved husband addiction

(Wear it quickly + Female Supreme + Sweet Pet + One-on-One pair of Cleanses) "Your Highness, someone bribed the gatekeeper." The butler handed the silver ingot in his hand to Bai Ran. "Ha…You want to inquire about my background with just a silver ingot?" She sneered. The world was really afraid that she would not die! However, was it so easy to bribe the servants of the Prince Regent's Residence? "No, it isn't." The butler waved his hands. "Hmm?" Bai Ran frowned. "That person wanted to know how big you are, how often you sleep and how often you wake up, whether you like spicy food or sweet food, when did you start practicing martial arts and swordsmanship, which one do you like more, whether you like romance or drinking alone…" The corners of Bai Ran's mouth curled up slowly. The silver ingot in his hand was still stained with his warmth, but the anxious little one behind the big tree at the entrance of the Prince's mansion did not know that he had fallen into her trap long ago… How could he escape from the trap she weaved with her love net? Of course, he had never thought of escaping. He didn't even have time to dig in! -- In order to find the three souls and seven spirits of the Sky Prince Long Yehan, the White Fox Empress, Bai Ran, held the Soul Lamp and traveled through the three thousand worlds. She met the female supreme system, Little Fourth Egg, who was naughty, cute, and innocent. She was sent to a woman's paradise. Bai Ran used the body of the host to travel around the female venerable dynasty. With the imperial power in hand, she completely enjoyed being a proud daughter of heaven. However, why didn't anyone tell her that doting husbands were also addictive? --

One thought is like dust

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The Crooked Mouth Naruto of the Wood Leaf

The story of the Yellow Ape Grandfather and Naruto becoming one… Perhaps…an accident?

Making Fire in Chestnut

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