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m3gah1tss
m3gah1tssLv45yr
2019-11-03 22:41

The plot is too forced,like really 36 chapters,ultra slow paced release,and you force the plot with the wishes.Just get it going.Also why not finish the **** wolf plot,then mix it between originals,twilight,like have Volturi come for mc and his alpha friends,and he is forced to gather allies,to finally kill volturi.

Teen Wolf The Argent

Boxer_Vivek
4.3
80 Chs

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Boxer_Vivek
Boxer_VivekAuthor

My book. My style. It's not like I'm writing to get paid or something. A lot of people will like it. And some don't. But still thanks for the review. A review is better than no review.

5yr
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aXionPingu
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So deleted my last review, it's just hard typing on mobile, so much easier with an actual keyboard. Well there aren't many ****wolf fanfiction out there and 90% of those i found were slash/ BL (nothing wrong with being gay, its just not my genre). The Story so far is nice, mc is op but he doesn't have a bazzilion abilitys aka cluster****, story isnt rushed either. I'm really looking forward how this plays out and for the love of everything thats holy, don't drop it.

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Lucifero
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Good story pls don't drop it.

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ADG
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Awesome story. Keep up the good work.

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jil_jung_juk
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Figurante
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Another boring character, addressing bland jokes to a divine entity. Superficial characters, the protagonist asked to reincarnate in **** wolf with a sayajin body and the entity began to sweat at the thought, hahaha she is thousands of years old and has certainly interviewed many people, as it would be possible she never had such a case ?! (The protagonist doesn't have anything special, so it's easy to believe that the entity just went out picking up random people to transport to another world. Obviously she's already interviewed many.) Reasonable grammar, kind of vocabulary ... bad. Terrible chapter size. I only read until chapter 2 and didn't even finish the chapter, I didn't want to risk my sanity. Outro personagem chato, dirigindo piadinhas sem graça a uma entidade divina. Personagens superficiais, o protagonista pediu para reencarnar em teen wolf com um corpo sayajin e a entidade começou a suar com o pensamento, hahaha ela tem milhares de anos e com certeza já entrevistou muitas pessoas, como seria possível ela nunca ter passado por um caso desses?! (O protagonista não tem algo especial, então é fácil acreditar que a entidade só saí pegando pessoas aleatórias para transportar para outro mundo. Obviamente ela já entrevistou muitos.) Gramática razoável, vocabulário meio... ruim. Tamanho dos capítulos péssimo. Li somente até o capítulo 2 e nem mesmo terminei o capítulo, não quis arriscar minha sanidade.

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Gabrielwaterune
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Me encanta el mundo de lo supernatural tiene mucho potencial pero le falta mas historia......................................................................

5yr
CM15
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Angela_Gibby
Angela_GibbyLv5

This plot is...interesting I’ll bookmark it to read when I can spare stones Thank you author! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

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SexyBeast
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I just wanted to ask how many words on average in each of your chapters? Stupid 140 character limit always making me type more. Stupid 140 character limit always making me type more. Stupid 140 character limit always making me type more.

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