what is rd person point of view examples

I feel this is your first so an advice use 3rd person point of view 2. keep changing point view from him to another person but so far you did avery good job 👏👍

I like the concept of the story,but I don't think the multiple points of view is a good thing.I think that if you want to get every ones fillings about what is happening in the story then do 3rd person point of view were you get every ones reactions.But then again I don't think having every single persons feelings is good maybe if you stuck to 1,2,or3 people's points of view that it will be better and then so often do a third person point of view and tell how everyone is feeling.

This is a fairly early review but so far its a pretty good read. The one major problem I see is the author is writing from a 3rd person point of view but then accidentally uses a 1st person point of view. It’s incredibly jarring and the only gripe I have. When the narrator is summarizing whats happening it shouldn’t seem like the MC is speaking.

From the first chapter alone, this is a fun and intriguing book to read! Very good descriptions and I love how it's written in the narrator's point of view instead of 1st person or 3rd person. Thx for recommending your book to me!

It would be better if the main character is the first person point of view with the pronoun 'I'. It would be better if the main character is the first person point of view with the pronoun 'I'. It would be better if the main character is the first person point of view with the pronoun 'I'.