bardock dbz

Its a good take on Raditz, he had alot of potential in dbz but it was squandered, i wish he and bardock both would appear in dbz super,but this story is so very good

A great idea for a novel. That's all it has though. First grammar is bad well not that bad but still bad. Sentences Don't make sense sometime. Nerf many people an MC. Then summoning the worst characters that anyone would summon. What I mean by worst is weak, unskilled, useless character compared to the dozens of other characters MC could of chosen. For example MC gets to chose a character from DBZ an chose's Bardock? now I have nothing against bardock but there are so many better than him that actually know martial arts an many other stuff while being more powerful. Not only that you actually nerf an already weak Bardock!!! I won't read this now.

Awesome story I like how our mc's more aware and has to start off as a baby and that he didn't take the Bardock movie route and it appears that Bardock actually cares for Raditz, Gine, and Kakarot.

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Awesome story love the OC Can’t wait for bardock I wonder if she will have the ability of the Namekuseijins to make dragon ball or others And I absolutely love gine