Death Guns In Another World
Alexander Kael Touch, a self-made young billionaire, found his meteoric rise tragically cut short on a school trip. But fate had other plans, whisking him and his classmates away to a realm of swords and magic – a world where power manifested as unique: ''Gifts."
While friends awoke to magnificent Gifts, Alex's Gift yielded only two enigmatic guns: one gleaming silver, the other shrouded in black.
Worse, he couldn't use magic like his peers, drawing scorn and derision. Yet, fueled by an unyielding spirit and a burning dream, Alex refused to falter.
In this new world, he craved not wealth, but the strength to forge his own destiny. One goal burned bright: to rise once more, not to the peaks of financial power, but to the pinnacle of strength and control.
This is the chronicle of Alexander Kael Touch, the boy with two guns in a world of wonders. A tale of relentless struggle, forged in the crucible of mockery and doubt. A journey to the apex, where the scorned student will become the ultimate warrior.
Whispers of the "Death Guns Master" stir, echoes of a legend rising from slumber. The world may have forgotten them, but they are coming back.
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Nickaido's here with D-Guns, do not expect the smartest MC because he was once a billionaire, is still young, he has his flaws, he will learn and grow, so will the other characters. At the beginning other characters are stronger but worry not everything will change starting from around chapter 80 onward. Also sorry in advance because some of the female characters have strong backgrounds but it's for the sake of the future story, this book is just the start, I'm still improving.
Sorry in advance, English is not my first language, so they may be grammatical errors and misspelled words. Please bear with me. I'm trying to improve to provide a better story.
Starting from chapter 200th, I have started using Grammarly premium to help me with the English, so I think it's become better. As for the earliest chapters, I have started to re-edit them slowly; I will do more as I get more time. Maybe hire a professional editor when I can.
Once again, this is not some sophisticated story; it has many flaws, which I'm trying to learn from; however, this doesn't make the story less enjoyable. Would you please give it a try?
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Me likey, me likey a lot! Very good story till now For writing quality, I give 4 dumplings because author-chan writes well but has some spelling/grammar errors here and there. For stability of updates I give 5 dumplings because only 10 chapters are out right now so it's hard to judge. I give the benefit of the dumpling to author-chan! For story development I give 5 dumplings because the story is well fleshed out till now, there is a good mysterious air in the plot and the flow is very good. For the character design, I give 5 dumplings because the characters are already very meaty in terms of emotions. Their personalities are fleshed out pretty well and fit the book. Author-chan, you are doing good! For world background, I give 3 dumplings because the world hasn't really been fleshed out but since it's only 10 chapters I give 1 bonus dumpling for a total of 4, not 1, not 2, not even 3 but 4 whole dumplings! Author-chan fight on! In total this book has stolen 23 dumplings from me gaining the title "Dumpling Rain" 0-4 = dumpling takeout 5-9 = dumpling platter 10-14 = dumpling feast 15-19 = dumpling buffet 20-24 = dumpling rain 25 = dumpling dragon gate Author-chan, Work Hard!