dumpling days story
[Warning: R18+] When Hate turns into Love... and Vengeance turns into Passion... Will he choose to start over with her? ======= Phantomflake's soul got separated from her body after committing suicide in front of her enemy, Nathan Sparks, the Supreme Leader of Syphiruz Mafia. She woke up only to find out that her body (which was in a coma state) was being held captive by Nathan 'the Devil!', who was trying to prolong her life. And what was his motive? To kill her by his own hand and torture her to death! Nathan has a deep resentment against Phantomflake as she was the one who assassinated the most precious person in his life. He wanted revenge! And things just got more exciting when a magical creature appeared in front of Phantom's soul, giving her a ridiculous mission in exchange of regaining her body back. "Make him fall in love with you within 100 days!" The flying creature said, pointing his small paws at Nathan who expressionlessly stood next to her sickbed. With her eyes going round, Phantomflake made an 'you-got-to-be-kidding-me' face at the flying creature. No way! That's a mission impossible! This guy loathed her so much. How would she do that??! ****** Excerpt: Nathan grabbed her by her neck. "Don't play tricks with me, Phantomflake." Nathan's cold voice reverberated inside the room, his eyes burning with rage. But Phantomflake just smirked at him, pressing her hands against his chest, her fingers teasing him. "You can't kill me, Nate. Just admit it. You've already fallen for me." With one swift move, Phantomflake pulled his shirt, closing their gaps as she crushed her lips against his lips. Surprisingly, Nathan just found himself responding to her. He lost! He couldn't resist her. ===== I owned the Book Cover (=";"=) Artist: Bea Cortez Join Author's server to get updates and announcements about the book. Discord link: https://discord.gg/WymeFaeQe
Me likey, me likey a lot! Very good story till now For writing quality, I give 4 dumplings because author-chan writes well but has some spelling/grammar errors here and there. For stability of updates I give 5 dumplings because only 10 chapters are out right now so it's hard to judge. I give the benefit of the dumpling to author-chan! For story development I give 5 dumplings because the story is well fleshed out till now, there is a good mysterious air in the plot and the flow is very good. For the character design, I give 5 dumplings because the characters are already very meaty in terms of emotions. Their personalities are fleshed out pretty well and fit the book. Author-chan, you are doing good! For world background, I give 3 dumplings because the world hasn't really been fleshed out but since it's only 10 chapters I give 1 bonus dumpling for a total of 4, not 1, not 2, not even 3 but 4 whole dumplings! Author-chan fight on! In total this book has stolen 23 dumplings from me gaining the title "Dumpling Rain" 0-4 = dumpling takeout 5-9 = dumpling platter 10-14 = dumpling feast 15-19 = dumpling buffet 20-24 = dumpling rain 25 = dumpling dragon gate Author-chan, Work Hard!