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The plot of the story is very intriguing. The method the author has used to introduce the characters to the readers is breath-taking. All the best to the author.

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It is one of those beautiful story. Even it is written in fantasy. Description of the energy, method and everything are beautiful. I didn't know how to elaborate, but it is the best story. 😊

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This novel has a lot of potential with a very solid plot. However, there are multiple grammatical and capitalization errors. These errors make the novel a bit difficult to understand and follow. Too much information is given at once. The novel won't be as intriguing if you tell out everything from the beginning. I recommend that you try and utilize the show and not tell method and try to maintain the story flow. I hope you don't get offended by my review, I'm just being honest. I wish you all the best [img=recommend]