white walkers full story

Stopped reading at chapter 223, this is GOT right? so, what's the main thing people like about GOT, it's politics and intrigue with a few battles between mortal men. in a fanfic it could be the kingdom building which is what i was here for. no one would say that their favourite part was the White Walkers right? if anything they only slow down and distract from the plot and intrigue which is what we like about GOT. The author has basically made the White Walkers the main subject of the rest of the story, the White Walkers are more powerful now than in the original work due to an idiot godes who's introduced to the MC in around chapter 200. either way, I'm here for GOT not this White Walkers preparation simulator. once i realized that the rest of the Fanfic would focus on beating the White Walkers that was when i dropped it. soooo many authors make this mistake in GOT Fanfics, they make a faceless, emotionless and extremely boring entity like the White Walkers the enemy rather than focusing on the politics and intrigue of the seven kingdoms. The White Walkers ended up basically being a footnote in the original show, they never even made it past the north... and that's how the White Walkers should be treated in fanfics, a footnote, nothing more. there's also the fact that gods are involved now which basically ruins the mortal politics for me, everything is just to big. it's the same when i read other books, once the world ending threat is revealed i lose interest because the small stuff like politics and intrigue get less focus.

Absolutely awesome, would like to see a greater variety of spells though(protega diabolica) vs white walkers pls. Also try to improve transitions as the development of the story can be very fast.

The arc with the white walkers was definitely better written and more satisfying and the author was also able to capture the essence of the original characters really really well imo

There are some flaws, mainly the issue of the White Walkers who should be dormant during that period; also, the protagonist is unaware of the disaster that transforming someone into a vampire can cause

Seems like a really interesting rendition of the classic Zombie tale; many of the scenes remind me of Game of Thrones and the white walkers. I'm excited to see where it goes.