rest time social story

What sets this author apart from the rest is his/her ability to weave social issues into his stories. He touches on politics, social class, privilege, education system, among others. This is fairly common in fantasy and scifi novels published in print but not so much in webnovels. Great job!

Very quick Writing- impressiVe turnout of chapters. Strong character development, storyline deepens well. addictive read. some typos and sYntax errors but thats to be expected w/how fast the turnaround is and are easy to see the meaning intended. one suggestion to the author is to cut the phrase ‘my bad,’ it can pull the reader out of the story as it doesn’t seem to fit with the way the characters speak the rest of the time, the loosely based time period, or the social status of characters.

Not worth wasting your time. 2/3 of the story is great but the rest 1/3 is sh#t. The rest 1/3 story makes the story down the drains. . .

sorry but mc male is supposed to be smart and from story have social skills other the dating has interacted with girls. But so far acts as if full greenhouse child. I don't get it. rest of characters are well though out. story idea good but loses so much due to male mc mess of back history.

It should be noted that this book was very enjoyable, but I would like to start off with some weaknesses in the book. This translation really struggled with pronouns. He/she/her/him are more often wrong than right and the reader has to spend extra time figuring out who is being talked about or speaking. Additionally it is not uncommon for the wrong name to be translated. For example the youngest sister, Ah Xun, the story was always getting her name wrong. The rest of the story was great; it felt much more developed than a lot of historical novels. It felt well situated in it’s time period and appropriately within the social boundaries. I enjoyed this book.