narrative story
# decisive Shen Ran transmigrates to a fantasy world and becomes a disciple of the Empyrean Sword Sect. Problem is, everything about him is ordinary— ordinary talent, ordinary temperament, ordinary life… In this cruel world where cultivation talent determines how far one could go, this means that Shen Ran's future can be seen at a glance. Banished to the servant quarters as a servant disciple, his daily grind is to attend to mundane chores which will go on until he dies of old age a hundred years later. Then he comes across a narrative modification system which makes it possible to rewrite entire lives! An avid reader of online novels in his previous life, Shen Ran relishes the chance to read the narratives of everyone and everything and alter them. The narratives modified by him will become reality! This is the story of how he transforms his ordinary life by editing his narrative and going on to cultivate the Dao, handle calamities, and rule the ages. And he is limited only by his imagination!
the narrative is hard to understand but the flow was good but it still same different story that every novel has but "sarcasm" in the writing .For me it hard to understand the narrative and sarcasm as I am not native English speaker
The story provides an intriguing and innovative approach to the superhero universe, blending familiar elements from Marvel and DC. The narrative begins with an exciting twist by transferring the protagonist, Jack, from the skin of Tony Stark to that of Bruce Wayne, adding an additional layer of complexity to the story. The proposed fusion between Batman and Iron Man promises a unique approach to the narrative, exploring the creative potential of uniting two comic book icons. The decision to introduce advanced technology into a more primitive universe creates a fascinating dynamic but also poses significant narrative challenges. Exploring Jack's intact memories adds psychological depth to the story, offering opportunities for reflection on identity and purpose. However, striking a balance between Batman's darker narrative and Iron Man's charismatic personality may prove to be a challenge.
This is a challenging work, the author is embedded in the narrative and it feels more like someone telling you a story than reading one, it's definitely rather unique. The grammar could use some work, as well as the narrative cohesion, but it's a good read for those who enjoy self-referential works.
Great story with good pace...good narrative....clear understanding of characters.... thoroughly enjoying it....never boring.... romantic and very straight forward
The emotions being portrayed are raw and visceral and I believe that heavily lies at the narrative... Having a good narrative, would mean having a better flow of story, character's emotions etc. And that's what I noticed the most when reading your story... It's not exactly vivid but the words and sentence being used made the story flow more efficiently... I appreciate the narrative... Keep up the good work