telling a narrative story
Ji Cheng stood beside her bed, staring at her face in wonder, questioning if it was real. A smile appeared on his lips as he saw her eyelashes fluttering, signaling that she was waking up. However, her reaction was far from what he had expected. “Pak!” He stared at her in shock, covering his face with his palm. Did she just slap him? Xie Ming's mouth opened in pure terror as she realized what she had done. She slapped the Emperor. The cruel and infamous Emperor of the Ji Dynasty? ‘Am I going to die again? I just came to this world; do I have to die again?’ .... Zhao Ming was the Empress of the Ji Dynasty, but in name only. Never treated or respected as the Empress and witnessing the worst of palace life, fate gave her another chance to shine. One day, when she opened her eyes, she found herself in unfamiliar surroundings—a world full of people using strange items, a world apart from hers. Will the Empress of the Ji Dynasty be able to survive in this competitive world? ** Xie Ming was the wife of the richest businessman in the country, with a reputation for being nothing but trash. She was labeled a rebellious brat and a shameless, lazy woman. When she opened her eyes one day, she found herself in a strange world. Holy Sh*t! She had become the Empress of the Ji Dynasty. Can this rebellious, shameless, lazy woman adjust to the cruel, strict palace world? Will she change, or will she change the world instead? Can the Emperor get used to her being proactive in every single thing? Even in bed? The Emperor dotes on his wife to the point that she feels exhausted. How can a man be this cute? It should be illegal for men to be this cute. ... She pushed him onto the bed and sat on his body, looking at him with her tempting eyes. “Zhao Ming, what... what are you doing?” “Shh... Your Majesty, you just need to relax. I will do all the work.” She leaned in and sealed his lips with her moist lips, making him crave her even more. Can the switch between Zhao Ming, the Empress of Ji Dynasty, and Xie Ming, a known rebellious troublemaker in modern times, bring a spark to the lives of those around them and unveil the hidden connection between them? ..... Instagram: @kamlyn_love Discord: https://discord.gg/NTPCE7YZm7 Join the server to connect with me and fellow readers. * The story is an original novel and not a translation. * Note: The cover has been taken from Pinterest. Credits to the owner. Thank you
This is a challenging work, the author is embedded in the narrative and it feels more like someone telling you a story than reading one, it's definitely rather unique. The grammar could use some work, as well as the narrative cohesion, but it's a good read for those who enjoy self-referential works.
This is Novel good with unique story telling. Their is mystery is story.their is parallel narrative for MC story i.e. present and past of MC. BUT MC is Mega Simp. So this Novel is NO NO for Me.
The first person POV is VERY dreadful. The story would have been a notch better if it was written as a narrative. Overall it's a good story but the grammar makes it hard for me to follow. But this shouldn't stop anyone from giving it a try, some people might enjoy this type of story telling.
Greetings, I'm Ash, the author of this tale. Originally, I had the intention to craft a survival fantasy narrative, but my creative direction shifted. Now, I'm immersed in telling a story about the transformation of a seemingly "loser" into a successful individual, all thanks to the influence of certain people.
Heartwarming and written in a simple style that made the story relatable. I hope to see the story unveil with more updates in the future! Great story-telling and compelling narrative.