Rose pampered
"The exquisite cloud bun is full of patterns, and the wind sleeves are fragrant with roses."
She was the rose in the wind, bright and beautiful like the morning sun. She was the messenger of spring, Ling Weiwei.
Very few people knew that a butterfly with a broken wing could also break through its shackles and learn to fly.
Ling Weiwei, who was imprisoned in the cage, never dared to accept her fate. Her dream was to travel through the mountains and rivers of the world, use her own ability to describe the mountains and rivers, lakes and seas, and use her own hands to break through the sky.
She had come back from the dead, one step at a time. Even if she flew into the sky, she gradually understood the importance of family, learned how to protect family, love, and friendship, and how to chase after her dreams.
In the beautiful natural scenery, one person was lonely. It was better to be happy alone than to be happy with others. With fragrance as a weapon and thorns as a protective umbrella, one could chase dreams without regret and live up to the mountains and rivers.
Jinying rose
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I have a few things to say regarding this hunger games fanfic version. At first, I was hooked onto the story and description. Loved the character design and how the dead are describe and their perspectives and thought processes. However, I have had some displeasure as I continued through the story. One, why the hell do you get rid of a perfectly good character like Valeria Thorne. In the story, you depicted her as a mathematician and adaptable specimen. There were many scenarios like in the original hunger games she could be used to survive through events and maybe struggles to start a revolution or rebellion. Isn't the person of a mc to be the main attraction? Ik I am an amateur but connecting the careers training and mindset to win just felt really wrong. Two, I have read all chapters. And putting another POV of a character aka Cato to the task of finishing the MC's supposed task is contradictory. I could accept her dying much later in the story or surviving. But killing off a goddamn mc this early is the equivocal to killing the story by making viewers lose interest. Although Cato's POV was interesting indeed, this story could've gone way better than it is now. I hope you can comment on this review to explain and maybe I'd understand. But I just hoped we'd have more scenes with the ship sailing with Valeria and Cato. Cuz that would be an appealing wonder of the difference in personalities and perspectives of the events other than the hunger games like the revolt.