Douluo Continent: Dig up the Silver Dragon's Wife and Children at the Beginning
[Douluo's Fine Quality][Super Cool Story][Relax Brain Hole][Digging Ancestral Graves with Goddess]
[You have arrived at the start of the game and dug out a slippery little Silver Dragon. Please clean her up, but remember not to hurt her too much. You have successfully contracted the Silver Dragon King Gu Yue and Na as your wives. You are rewarded with the Shepherd God martial soul, the subsidiary True Dragon martial soul attribute, and innate full soul power!]
[You've successfully blown up Qian Xun Ji's coffin. Bibi Dong is happy, Qian Ren Xue understands the truth-rewarded with angel holy attribute, spirit power increased by ten ranks, rewarded with growth wisdom spirit ring x3…]
[You have successfully dug through the Tang Family's ancestral grave, Tang Hao is dumbfounded, Tang Xiao is stunned-Reward host rank 10 spirit power, Hao Tian Divine Might attribute, Holy Paraquat attribute…]
[You have successfully dug through the Douluo Emperor's Mausoleum: Summoning type soul skill, the first emperor of the ages, Qin Shihuang, Supreme Emperor's Might…]
" You have successfully opened the Coffin of the Gods of the Divinity. You have been rewarded with the Super Divine Weapon, God Slaying Sword. Your Godhead has been upgraded by three levels…"
"Hello, I'm a divine-tier gravedigger. Please be prepared. I'll randomly pick one of your ancestral graves to excavate within seven days and order your ancestors 'souls."
" I'm not a scumbag. I just want the goddesses to witness the legends of their ancestors."
A Divine Tomb Token and a Dustless Shadow dug from Douluo to the heavens.
Song of the Black Jail
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I have a few things to say regarding this hunger games fanfic version. At first, I was hooked onto the story and description. Loved the character design and how the dead are describe and their perspectives and thought processes. However, I have had some displeasure as I continued through the story. One, why the hell do you get rid of a perfectly good character like Valeria Thorne. In the story, you depicted her as a mathematician and adaptable specimen. There were many scenarios like in the original hunger games she could be used to survive through events and maybe struggles to start a revolution or rebellion. Isn't the person of a mc to be the main attraction? Ik I am an amateur but connecting the careers training and mindset to win just felt really wrong. Two, I have read all chapters. And putting another POV of a character aka Cato to the task of finishing the MC's supposed task is contradictory. I could accept her dying much later in the story or surviving. But killing off a goddamn mc this early is the equivocal to killing the story by making viewers lose interest. Although Cato's POV was interesting indeed, this story could've gone way better than it is now. I hope you can comment on this review to explain and maybe I'd understand. But I just hoped we'd have more scenes with the ship sailing with Valeria and Cato. Cuz that would be an appealing wonder of the difference in personalities and perspectives of the events other than the hunger games like the revolt.