Eastern Jin Dynasty: Starting from the son of the refugee marshal who returned to the north
326 AD, the first year of Xianhe, Emperor Cheng of Jin.
The war in the north continued, and the two Zhao states stood side by side. The Heavenly King of Great Zhao, Schleswig, was unstoppable!
Li Xiong, a Di man, occupied the land of abundance and called himself emperor. However, he made a prince for his brother's son, so there was a hidden disaster.
Zhang Mao claimed to be the king of Liang, Liangzhou horse, completely divided with the Jin Dynasty.
Further north, the Murong Xianbei, Yuwen Xianbei, and Duan Xianbei appeared and left their mark in history.
The war in the Central Plains continued, the people were exhausted, and the children of the Han family were reduced to two-legged sheep!
The emperor's clothes crossed south. The court of Jin was pacifying Wang Dun's rebellion. Emperor Yuan died, Emperor Ruzi ascended the throne, and Yu Liang was in charge of Taiwan Province.
A new storm was already brewing!
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[Short version: The story of my father and I rebelling and the Northern Expedition.]
I dare not worry when the rain falls
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I have a few things to say regarding this hunger games fanfic version. At first, I was hooked onto the story and description. Loved the character design and how the dead are describe and their perspectives and thought processes. However, I have had some displeasure as I continued through the story. One, why the hell do you get rid of a perfectly good character like Valeria Thorne. In the story, you depicted her as a mathematician and adaptable specimen. There were many scenarios like in the original hunger games she could be used to survive through events and maybe struggles to start a revolution or rebellion. Isn't the person of a mc to be the main attraction? Ik I am an amateur but connecting the careers training and mindset to win just felt really wrong. Two, I have read all chapters. And putting another POV of a character aka Cato to the task of finishing the MC's supposed task is contradictory. I could accept her dying much later in the story or surviving. But killing off a goddamn mc this early is the equivocal to killing the story by making viewers lose interest. Although Cato's POV was interesting indeed, this story could've gone way better than it is now. I hope you can comment on this review to explain and maybe I'd understand. But I just hoped we'd have more scenes with the ship sailing with Valeria and Cato. Cuz that would be an appealing wonder of the difference in personalities and perspectives of the events other than the hunger games like the revolt.