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In the wilderness survival variety show, vk delicious peach had traveled to the 1960s due to an accident during a thunderstorm. When faced with a room full of dilapidated air, vk delicious peach expressed that she wanted to choose DogLeading. Fortunately, she found out that she had a huge golden finger-the super selection base that she had spent a huge sum of money to build had followed her! It was a big treasure that had everything from food, clothing, housing, education, health care, beauty, fitness, eating, drinking, and playing. It was an existence that did not lack any natural products. There were only those that he could not imagine and those that the selection base did not have. After all, the status of a big shot in the industry was not for nothing. If the landlord had fat food, his little heart wouldn't panic…
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I have a few things to say regarding this hunger games fanfic version. At first, I was hooked onto the story and description. Loved the character design and how the dead are describe and their perspectives and thought processes. However, I have had some displeasure as I continued through the story. One, why the hell do you get rid of a perfectly good character like Valeria Thorne. In the story, you depicted her as a mathematician and adaptable specimen. There were many scenarios like in the original hunger games she could be used to survive through events and maybe struggles to start a revolution or rebellion. Isn't the person of a mc to be the main attraction? Ik I am an amateur but connecting the careers training and mindset to win just felt really wrong. Two, I have read all chapters. And putting another POV of a character aka Cato to the task of finishing the MC's supposed task is contradictory. I could accept her dying much later in the story or surviving. But killing off a goddamn mc this early is the equivocal to killing the story by making viewers lose interest. Although Cato's POV was interesting indeed, this story could've gone way better than it is now. I hope you can comment on this review to explain and maybe I'd understand. But I just hoped we'd have more scenes with the ship sailing with Valeria and Cato. Cuz that would be an appealing wonder of the difference in personalities and perspectives of the events other than the hunger games like the revolt.