vivification of the sparrows story

also known as true sparrows, or Old Worldsparrows, names also used for a particular genus of the family, Passer.[1] They are distinct from both the American sparrows, in the family Passerellidae, and from a few other birds sharing their name, such as the Java sparrow of the family Estrildidae. Many species nest on buildings and the house and Eurasian tree sparrows, in particular, inhabit cities in large numbers, so sparrows are among the most familiar of all wild birds. They are primarily seed-eaters, though they also consume 

Sparrows are a family of small passerine birds. They are also known as true sparrows, or Old Worldsparrows, names also used for a particular genus of the family, Passer.[1] They are distinct from both the American sparrows, in the family Passerellidae, and from a few other birds sharing their name, such as the Java sparrow of the family Estrildidae. Many species nest on buildings and the house and 

This novel started off really well, even the world and character building is pretty good. After he went to the five element world the second time, this novel's down fall started. The amount fillers is insane, it put even MGA to shame. This is the first novel I have read where the MC is still stuck in the impoverished starting place even at chapter 600. MC faces no setbacks for his idiotic decisions. I think his life spirit should have died when it got kidnapped to sparrows village. Certain places the MC should be there and not in training like during the mercenary guild meeting all the powers. Author needs to improve his creativity. Currently this novel is mediocre at best and will frustrate you most of the time. Only time will tell if it gets back to its best.

Looking for feedback on my new fantasy novel about sacred beasts repaying a vet.[img=Cries]Lin Wan had known since childhood that she was different from everyone else. When other kids went outside, at most they'd tease a cat or pet a dog. When she went outside, every animal within miles rushed toward her like someone had called a town meeting. As a child, all she had to do was stand downstairs in her apartment complex for three minutes. Cats rubbed against her legs. Dogs wagged their tails around her. Sparrows boldly landed on her shoulders. Even passing geese—usually aggressive little tyrants—stopped pecking people and obediently sat by her feet like bodyguards. Once she started elementary school, strange things kept appearing in her backpack.

Looking for feedback on my new fantasy novel about sacred beasts repaying a vet.[img=Cries]Lin Wan had known since childhood that she was different from everyone else. When other kids went outside, at most they'd tease a cat or pet a dog. When she went outside, every animal within miles rushed toward her like someone had called a town meeting. As a child, all she had to do was stand downstairs in her apartment complex for three minutes. Cats rubbed against her legs. Dogs wagged their tails around her. Sparrows boldly landed on her shoulders. Even passing geese—usually aggressive little tyrants—stopped pecking people and obediently sat by her feet like bodyguards. Once she started elementary school, strange things kept appearing in her backpack.