rocky balboa based on a true story

( HighIQ, genius) author ima be honest rocky has rocks of brains and adding Athena aint gonna change that, the man has bought little to nothing to help himself in this new world I 100% keep thinking you should,ve add a system( skills based prob) or something else but more than base Ima on chapter 600 plus and Rocky’s still dumb and now ask Athena for help every time something happens, I understand the story’s moving forward but rocky your ground work and he’s just not up to it outside of when he’s in his white demon armor You’ve done nothing with Rocky and Lilia, Rocky barely used his knowledge to help them with the runes, Thens it’s the fact your world in magic base in the magic world and you completely gave up on that We know so little of how’s the magic works, Rocky’s level of understanding of it, what elements/magics make up this world, countless ideas rocky could have made now with better understanding of the world and the way magic works, has teachers but he ain’t learn much tbh, why has rocky made little to no effort learning in from one of the renowned true mages/ wizard, why can’t rocky draw magic circle, why haven’t we see him use spells, can the common people use spells at all like cleans cooking, defense spells idk See and that’s another I don’t even know or remember what kind of magic world this is. Are they mages, magicans, wizards etc… And more But I do think this story tho but your not executing it in the best way and leaving so much out the story, 600 read and m Rocky’s just making true advancement, like how does buddy train with the best and still barely a level 3 mage or something, untalented Ig lol, but rocky has been buzzing Maybe you’ll think about having rocky add concealment runes to the sky city And I just though of that rocky s of another world he should be using his way of think you give people ideas to give people to help them think more broadly

Interesting story so far, was a little rocky but it balanced out.Interesting story so far, was a little rocky but it balanced out.Interesting story so far, was a little rocky but it balanced out.

It was a rocky start with the lead character, but well worth stickimg with it. Wonderful story with amazing characters, and a world i can easily envision based on the descriptions . I look forward to reading more about them in future books!

10/10 a little rocky in the early parts but this is really freakin awsome!!! 10/10 a little rocky in the early parts but this is really freakin awsome!!! 10/10 a little rocky in the early parts but this is really freakin awsome!!! 10/10 a little rocky in the early parts but this is really freakin awsome!!!