naruto kills orochimaru in chunin exams fanfiction

Good book although it is slow paced it was interesting, waiting for the start of Chunin exams , hope to see new story arc in naruto which is as interesting as naruto

This is a slow and passionate story lived in the world of Naruto, but at least for now, forget Naruto, Sasuke, Zabuza, chunin exams, nothing like that, here we have an original story that surprises us in each chapter and makes us root for the MC. Good writing, great character development.

Very well written story so far about Naruto realistically gaining future memories during the chunin exams. Loving the relationships with everybody so far. And I especially love the fact that Naruto still feels like Naruto. Definitely hoping this continues and isn’t dropped.

First thing good job on the story you made Naruto OP but you follow the typical troop of the chunin exams. WQ: your writing is clear. SoP: updates are stable 👍 CD: WB: you could make better use of the Narutoverse eg. The flying technique from onhoki is a must have.

I love this fanfiction, first of all it's a bit boring at the start cuz of the world building, plot set up and mostly training but it is idea and execution I am enjoying. Mini sinopsis: MC is a reincarnator and I'm his second life, an ai generated game based on Naruto is created, knowing the plot, he seeks to become the most powerful player, plot twist: players are joining the akstuki and and want the 9 tails before the chunin exams: war starts Author, since it's a game version of Naruto, as the cover page you could put the symbol of the land of fire symbol but, it has the digitisation particle effect instead of the, honestly pretty lame and generic Naruto pic