book about color blindness fiction
In a desolate world where humans are on the brink of extinction, conquering countless dungeons, fighting against ferocious beasts, what happens to someone blind and powerless? Nial's glorious fate was taken from him when he was only three, leaving him blind and without a trace of mana. 15 years later he was still enduring the humiliation of a rotten society that favored the mighty. Society nearly took away his innocence and brightness, forcing him to mature, giving him an unbending will. However, everything changed the moment he awoke his Origin. He devoured Ancient Curses and slaughtered Gods and Devils! Angels? He will make them kneel! Devils and the such? All will be in his grasp ** Even though I’m blind, I see more than anyone else! I devour Curses and take control over darkness. Mark my words… [It will be all of you that will have to kneel in front of me!] Just come at me Dragons, Angels, Devils, and Gods…if you dare to! Otherwise, my ascend will be your doom! Follow the odyssey of an ordinary, blind youth towards godhood as his fate that had once been taken from him shall be returned. Witness his pain, and growth to an existence feared even by Ancient Gods and Fiends from primordial times! ** [A/N: The MC's behavior in the early stage of the Novel will be different from what the Synopsis suggests. Please take a note of that while reading :D]
I really feel like certain aspects of the story are just taking away from it. I quite liked the story until the blindness part when it stopped having a MC. after becoming blind it really feels like its 1 chapter about Vincent and 2 chapters about the world. the blindness itself was fairly forced and lasts forever with no reasonable purpose/story benefit. does he grow from being blind? not really does the story progress due to the blindness? only ending the engagement Does the blindness have a defined purpose within any reasonable timeframe? absolutely not. 100 chapters later still blind having almost the same problems as before and more than half the chapters are not about the mc. Another in a long list of 150 chapters that are pretty good and a steep drop off after that. for me as soon as he went blind the focus became the world not the MC. At least half the story from that point became about others acting around him with short bits about his activities. I dont mind the duel but having a 100+ chapter challenge that really seems to make the mc almost irrelevant killed the story for me.