naruto yakumo kurama lemon fanfiction

I like the writing quality and the world building a lot. TBH my only frustration is Yakumo. Of all the ninja in the naruto verse, she is one of the blandest characters of all. I don't particularly want to imagine her as a love interest ever. I can't imagine many people do. I am struggling to understand why there is so much attention given to her.

I have already read this on Fanfiction.net. This fic is an absolute Cinema. Trust me. the Pairing (older Naruto) x Xanna(female Kurama)

hello im already read your story and ist not bad at all but i want you to make more focusing on naruto character because he's the real mc and its interesting to see how naruto and fujin relationship instead fujin business with money or even always make hiruzen got a problem, its such a boring story. and also why not make another character from filler story became fujin disciple or friend such like sora from fire temple (hi no kuni) or menma from rice field village? and also yakumo kurama from kurama clan? and more charecter development for hoka because its such a pity he always got desperated on another desperated

Regular fanfiction about Overpowered MC. Naruto is OP. Naruto with the system? Is Over Op! It would make sense to give a system if the main character was a civilian. Naruto is already strong without the golden finger. If Naruto trained normally and agreed with Kurama, then by the beginning of the second season, he would be at the level of Kage without using the sage mode.

It sort has a unique premise, but that is about it. The character flow is terrible, too many other fanfiction concepts were implemented and some how the Mc can control Naruto's mindscape to some degree. Overall, if it reworked and some events are spaced or rewritten better. It would probably be worth reading. Such as interaction with Mc and Kurama (It be better if they had actually interactions instead watching anime or manga all the time.), Rushing events such as getting rid of Danzo (Don't know if he actually dead or somehow will return, but either way it was too rushed.), or turning Naruto to the dark side (really not needed). In fact, it would probably be a bit better during the start instead the Mc being sealed in Naruto. Kurama chakra latched onto him so when he gained a body he also had part of Kurama apart of him forming a jinchuuriki yet not.