watching kakashi memories fanfiction

please don't drop. it's one of the very few Kakashi fanfiction and it's good

Good Novel.. Kakashi is shown to be getting stronger.. And he got no cheat except original memories,, talent and body.. I only hope it won't be dropped..

Currently at chapter 213, the story is very good, but there's a major inconsistency around chapters 160-190 concerning the ages of Kakashi, Obito, and the protagonist. When Kakashi first appeared, he was 10 years old, and Kakashi and Obito were the same age. Kakashi is 3 years younger than Renjiro, the protagonist's teammate. Then, suddenly, we see Obito as 13-14 years old, but the main character is only 6-9 months old. This error needs to be corrected, or it should be clarified whether the age difference between Kakashi and Obito is canon within this fanfiction. Thank you.

There is a big problem with the age of the main character. Kakashi created the Chidori when he was 12 years old during the 3rd Great Ninja War. Considering that Kakashi at the beginning of the Naruto manga was 26 years old and the main character of this fanfiction is 18 it means that your character created the chidori at the age of four.

Story is good but the side characters timeline is somewhat messedup. .. As an root aburame comes 10 years later than what was mentioned in this novel.. .also that the ichiraku ramen open after Kakashi's graduation as there is a specific episode of naruto for the opening showing them going on a mission after watching the shops opening but here Kakashi is just entering the academy. ..