naruto x temari chunin exams fanfic

Good book although it is slow paced it was interesting, waiting for the start of Chunin exams , hope to see new story arc in naruto which is as interesting as naruto

This is a slow and passionate story lived in the world of Naruto, but at least for now, forget Naruto, Sasuke, Zabuza, chunin exams, nothing like that, here we have an original story that surprises us in each chapter and makes us root for the MC. Good writing, great character development.

One of the better Naruto fanfics I have read but halfway through storyline shifts from Shinobi life- training, missions, battles etc to really boring politics between villages. Too much plot is focused on Chūnin exams, it’s starting to get annoying reading about chunin exams happening one after another without break between arcs and not even the best part about chunin exam- the battles, it’s just about politics behind it. All in all good fanfic, started out great but can still be salvageable if author realizes that this story is about ninjas so it should more action and less politics.

Naruto is and stays the MC the butterfly effect shows its ugly face (very nice to see that actions have consequences). The characters feel very natural, even if some meeting are not exactly canon. (Karen in the chunin exams). There is no Harm stuff, what i like very much, even if i would like to maybe mix up some relationships. Naruto is very strong, but not too overpowered to not be fun anymore. All around a very good fanfic.

Es genial este mc no nació en Konoha, e incluir habilidades Pokémon si que lo hace interesante, pero espero que incluyas a temari también en su relación, sería mc x ino x temari 😀😀😀😊