naruto x temari chunin exams fanfic

Good book although it is slow paced it was interesting, waiting for the start of Chunin exams , hope to see new story arc in naruto which is as interesting as naruto

This is a slow and passionate story lived in the world of Naruto, but at least for now, forget Naruto, Sasuke, Zabuza, chunin exams, nothing like that, here we have an original story that surprises us in each chapter and makes us root for the MC. Good writing, great character development.

Naruto is and stays the MC the butterfly effect shows its ugly face (very nice to see that actions have consequences). The characters feel very natural, even if some meeting are not exactly canon. (Karen in the chunin exams). There is no Harm stuff, what i like very much, even if i would like to maybe mix up some relationships. Naruto is very strong, but not too overpowered to not be fun anymore. All around a very good fanfic.

Very well written story so far about Naruto realistically gaining future memories during the chunin exams. Loving the relationships with everybody so far. And I especially love the fact that Naruto still feels like Naruto. Definitely hoping this continues and isn’t dropped.

was good until chunin exams. after that went way to dark for my taste. and ive always hated chiense novels that always use the trope of a hidden idenity through clones with naruto fanfics. its always delves more into what his clones are doing or his alter ego is doing than what the mc is actually doing.