chiquita fruit dark story

It’s nice... Although some part of the story are turn offs, like the part with One Piece and the dark dark fruit. But the idea that MC could create anything is very dope.

It's a beautiful story, I hope it continues. I have some suggestions since you'll be making clones of the hero: Have the hero's clones eat the following Devil Fruits: the Shadow Fruit (which has great potential) and the Devouring Fruit (because if the hero has them, or if he brings them to the world of Bleach, they might adapt to the world's laws and become capable of devouring them). The fragments of the Soul King merge with you, increasing your power. It's also possible that he might try to devour Hyouko and Ameri, the third fruit, which is the Dark-Dark Fruit because it's related to darkness and the Law of Theft or the Black Hole. The important thing is that each of their copies...He gives them a fruit, and then when he fuses again, it's possible that all the powers of those fruits will merge, and he'll have a super fruit that surpasses the fruit of the One Piece world's king, Imu. And he'll definitely take on the characteristics of the devouring fruit and the dark-dark fruit that steals. Other fruit abilities, and it's also possible that when they all combine, he can steal Yhwach's power. You can give other copies of the fruits you want, or you don't need to give fruits to copies at all. You can try something. The last option is to obtain a Fusion Fruit or Barrett, the owner of a Fusion Fruit, and attempt to fuse all the fruits I mentioned together. If he cannot fuse them with his own strength, you can enhance him with the Hgyoku to make the fusion successful.As for how to steal fruits like the Shadow Fruit that already has a user, create a cage from sea stone and place the fruit's owner inside. Then enter that cage with a normal fruit. When you kill the owner, the fruit's soul will transfer to that fruit.Naturally

Not bad overall good i like the devil fruit and good chose for the brother of yujiro hanma like being also like that he is a little less killery if thats a word then xebec. Two things one u probably know ur writing isnt the greatest yet also i believe xebec had the dark dark fruit not too sure but has good potential

I know it's a fanfiction but Roger had an eternal pose for laughtale which luffy destroyed in the movie. Akinu was missing in the last war. Elean has already eaten Blackbeard's dark dark fruit